Reviews for Shallow
XaccemFlare chapter 3 . 12/14/2012
Loving every chapter of this. Steamy and teasing throughout. Did like the backstory when they first met at his 16th birthday. So then how old is ventus now?

Do you intend to let them have some dirty fun at Vanitas' sister birthday?

Oohh, didn't think of the in-laws. How do they see Ventus?
XaccemFlare chapter 2 . 10/24/2012
It was twenty three times (:

It's so playful and makes me want to think of other places they did it in paris besides the bedroom. Eiffel tower, the notre dame cathedral?

Thank you kitty-kat for this wonderful chapter.
Kaitybaby123 chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
I'm begging you... Please continue!
XaccemFlare chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
go for it. It feels smutty and can go in different direction. drama, comedy, tragedy etc.

Oh how sweet that lemon scene was.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
As a VanVen fangirl... I'd say please continue! 3
I like your story even though Ven is a bit ooc which made my mental images running wild...herherhee :9
Moenitas chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
i think you should o3o it was a good story :3
Peppermint-n-Spice chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
Ven/Van! :D ...turn what into a series? :o