|Reviews for Sulking|
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 1 . 12/3/2014
I like it
| Harukaze Tamiya chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
Tsubasa-hime and Lady Sakura Li darned traidors...i hate they discover Tsubasa and his Lord Syaoran father...in his private moment of pleasure...
and Tsubasa-hime and Lady Sakura Li dont have stay there spying (fujoshis XD)...
But anyway...the one-shot are realy great and marvellous because are the continued of Its Working!... and of course i love the Syaorancest (SyaoranxTsubasa sex is the best *fujoshi face and blush* sorry i exagered xD)
Well i dont have more to say...only was this is the best continued of a one-shot ever...i liked it so much (SyaoxSyao Father and Son lustly Love *blush*)
1000 blessing and take care of you Green Sphynx-san...
i will see you later in my next reviews of yours fics
| Uwaaah chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
O-oh my God. o/u/o I absolutely freaking love this little series(?) of yours. I was pretty much giggling nonstop under my blanket for 20 minutes straight. Please keep it going.
I couldn't help but find Tsubasa's mortification throughout the story completely hilarious. Not that I can't blame him. His reactions were pretty realistic.
I can't wait to read more from you! Thanks for sharing your stories!
| kuroXIII chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
I almost gave up hope when you mentioned continuing this a week ago but I'm glad you decided to write this. :)
There were a few problems I was wondering about though. This sentence doesn't look quite right, "...he attempted to cling to his clone even around his own leg pressed up." And I can't really remember where but around the end where one of Sakuras were talking, I think one of the dialogue parts needed a question mark.
That's all I managed to catch though.
As to the actual fic itself, I really enjoyed Tsubasa's obvious embarrassment of his family and the smut scene is always good. Especially when they were showing off who got the better end of this deal. :D
What I also really liked is that Tsubasa wasn't sulking about the act itself but the meaning behind it. What his own feelings are in regards to wanting to have sex with his father. And I'm glad that Syaoran did catch on to this and is willing to help him through it.
Although I don't think it was bad for Tsubasa to sulk a bit. Technically, his reaction to the prequel is the normal reaction of most people after they have calmed down, if not a bit mild. But I also understand that you want to keep this as a oneshot and not an epic's worth of awkwardness with revalation at the end so it's okay.
I still think Tsubasa's reaction to his father's and mother's pervertedness is hilarious but reading the part about C!Sakura teaching R!Sakura how to be a voyuger is also very amusing. :)
Tsubasa's like the Kurogane of this setting where everyone has gone mad and they're dragging him with them. XD
Anyway, I look forward to reading more of your Syaoran/Tsubasa fics. :)
Btw, are you ever going to actually just call them by their names instead of "Syaoran" and "Syaoran Li", or is "Tsubasa" only going to be acknowledged by his parents and maybe Sakura?