|Reviews for The Heart Seeking Redemption: Birth By Sleep|
| Elizabeth chapter 6 . 3/8
Please update soon
| Exotos135 chapter 4 . 12/31/2013
*Sigh*, while I have no problem with Ars Arcanum appearing, and being honest I skipped a bit of this chapter, I still think it's pretty weird that Candace just got it out of nowhere instead of having to mix some stuff to get it.
Outside of that I'm fine, gonna see chapter 5 and then give my verdict...nah, just a normal review.
| Exotos135 chapter 3 . 12/31/2013
Okay, you have hit a bad spot by giving Candace the Elemental Ragnarok move. Now on the actual game, ragnarok can only be obtained through a fun board-like game, and it is a pretty broken weapon in that it can be pretty useful when fully leveled up.
By giving an elemental version to Candace, however, not only do you make it more broken, but you could potentially make Candace a mary sue, only with personality.
Outside of that I have no problems so far.
| Exotos135 chapter 2 . 12/31/2013
This was pretty long, and had it been longer I would have been surprised if I even managed to get through so many text walls. Nevertheless, it all seems pretty good so far, don't know what awaits the hero though and I can't say if they're in or out-of-character since It's been long since I last played the game.
It's still good enough though.
| Exotos135 chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
Looks good so far.
| 9ik chapter 6 . 12/12/2013
| DragonMaster Jurabi chapter 6 . 11/23/2013
I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY! Update...update...UPDATE! XD
| Elizabeth chapter 6 . 11/21/2013
Please update soon!
| Athena E. Lee 129 chapter 6 . 10/7/2013
yeah... um- you didn't really need to describe the dwarfs belt buckles, and also, the tarshus can also use a revive ability, but, what evs. call SOA129 monter co. next time you need a monster on speed dial! (BTW- don't call that, it's not a real number) also, ICE AGE ISN'T EVEN DISNEY (or square enix) but, hey- if you want to do that instead of, say, traverse town or the coliseum, that's fine, you can sound lame (ooh, and you will have a FLUFFY mammoth).
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/25/2013
Final have the perfect name for Phineas and Ferb's world! Carpe Diem it means to seize the day. That is totally them right? If some else has already suggested it then I am sorry cause I generally don't read others reviews. Please update soon I excited to read about the new worlds your adding.
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/19/2013
No don't let Phineas and Freb be wielders! This is Candace story and power. Also if Candace ends up some how stilling the same age till the whole Sora and Riku could Candace one day end up with Riku? It doesn't have to be flirty or anything just give us the foundation where, in our own minds, can see them going off to have a life together one today. He be attracted to her, after the quitting evil phase, and she only see him as a close friend til he leaves to be a Keyblade master. Will Candace join them if she hasn't had a chance to be tested? Will she and Riku make the cut? Or just Riku? Update soon ok.
| Scott chapter 6 . 8/7/2013
Also if you dont want to write a romance fic then why just have Jermey move on and Candace is single? Or maybe she see the feeling growing between Jermey and maybe Jenny or someone, and she lets him go. She also not the same girl he fell for. Also wont people target her boyfriend since she will alawys fight for the light? Will she somehow not age like Aqua and the other?
| Beth chapter 6 . 8/7/2013
Have you settled on a name on Candace world? If not how anout Summer Fun, Dreams Believe, Summer Daydreams, Tri World, or Never say Never.
| Scott chapter 6 . 8/7/2013
I like this story and I like the idea of Lady comforting Candace since she and her daugthers are barely in the moive. Would Candace be surpise at how missed Scamp is? I know Elizabeth offered it first, but can I suggest it as well because I really want to see how you will pull it off. Also will Candace complain about being stuck in another animal form? I can hear her say Oh come on! Will Candace be a grown dog, a puppy, or a half grown pup?
Post chapter 6 soon!
| Elizabeth chapter 6 . 7/13/2013
Thankyou for answering my questions. I also love how you keep surpising us! I never even consider Candace coming in the end like that. Will Candace also point the prince in the right way to get to Snow White? I also loved your fight scenes! Will Candace notice she is linked to them?
Also about Ice Age will a certain Saber have to deal with advice from the love dr. Sid? Will Manny also take a few jabs at him cause he hasnt fallen in love yet so he would be much help to him. Also I am cretain our fav saber will question Candace on why she wants to care for the baby. Will he at first think it the same reason he is? Will he and the others wonder how she knows how to care for a human baby and knows so much about? Will she lie and say humans saved her when she was a cub? Also for a blush could Candace sing the kid a lullaby and notice him staring at her and she asks what he blushs and trys to play it off embrasses himself some more and leave and when Candaces asks the others they way it away and say it nothing? I hear Candace thinking boys no matter form and I still dont get. Also since I dont think there are any female sabers in his pride will the alpha also order him to lure Candace the trap so he can make her his?
I dont know about the second dis. If anyone can pull it off it will be you. Will her twin also be born there?
Please update soon I cant wait to read more.
PS. I also like a long hair Candace just think it to easy to grab unless its in a bun or something.