Reviews for Sasuke Potter
Finding Glory Under Shadows chapter 3 . 11/1/2012
This is awesome!

Thank you for writing this chapter, I cant wait until the next one!

Harry's eyes are definitely going to be interesting... God please dont show Danzo! The greedy bastard would be all over him before you could say 'Magical Eyes Activate!'
PrincessKitty25 chapter 3 . 11/1/2012
Wow, this seems like a great story! I can't wait for the next update. I hope you post it soon!
LadyKarma18 chapter 3 . 11/1/2012
it would be intresting if you could maybe include ancient runes as well, though i have no idea as to how harry would learn them. It could certainly change the ways seals functions if you did do something like that, but thats just my opinion.

Great story :3 i really enjoyed reading this and am looking forward to the next chapter :3
AceZ-Shadow chapter 3 . 11/1/2012
the story is good but could you make the AN shorter and the story longer?
Sinclaire Silverfang chapter 3 . 11/1/2012
gahhhhh please update soon
Furionknight chapter 3 . 11/1/2012
I look forward to more :)
JKGoblin chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
When the warning said grammar errors you weren't kidding. Some of the sentences don't make sense and there are some misspellings. I would suggest you get a beta to help you.
DTDY chapter 3 . 11/1/2012
Brilliant chapter.

Also, don't worry about the grammar dear. I am from the US and still I find it a pain in the ass.

Be well and I shall await patiently for your next chapter.
Shizuka-naru Goketsu chapter 3 . 10/31/2012
It is a shame that he didn't teach Naruto anything more than a bigger Rasengan and how to use the first three tails of Kyuubi. As for this story? I reccomend you read a story called Uchiha Fukurou by ToBetasered; it hasn't been updated in awhile but I think it'll inspire you with some ideas.
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 3 . 10/31/2012
I like it! **
Fluehatraya chapter 3 . 10/31/2012
Aww, what a wonderful friendship.

I recommend making sure that you don't mix up the spelling of a word with another, like 'quiet' - to not be loud - with 'quite', which has a totally different meaning. Your sentence structuring is definitely unusual - a result of your not being native to English, probably - but I personally find it quirky and enjoying to read.
CrescentMelody chapter 3 . 10/31/2012
Oh my goodness! Poor guy, sort of. I really did like the two friends bonding moment. The deadly hallow symbol in his green eyes caught me by surprise. It was a good kind of surprise though.

I can't wait 'till the next chapter. Update soon, alright?
VNaz123 chapter 3 . 10/31/2012
Hey! Great job till now. All you need to do is get a proof-reader who can spot the few mistakes you make. And since you mentioned you are open to pairings, please let this not be a yaoi. Also, with the way you depict Sasuke/Harry, I don't think any of the girls his age would be a good match. Could you consider Guren, Shizune or Samui as potential love interests?
My Solitude chapter 3 . 10/31/2012
This is a pretty interesting chapter. XD
merryday chapter 3 . 10/31/2012
Hey, don't beat yourself up regarding the grammer! Each chapter is better than the last. Even native speakers have trouble with using the correct tenses.
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