|Reviews for Dreamsmoke|
| Lou chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
*it'd be called thinking if I actually used my brain, but...'thinks about it'*
That's cool. ;-D Heh.
| Sesshomaru's-gal chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
It's sweeter when we FUCK, of course
damn good line
| KNR chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
It is I, Starlit-Knight, once again. Here to say I injoyed yet another of your postings.
I really injoyed Kagomes little 'Did I say that out load' scene.
Talk to you soon.
| Naomi chapter 1 . 12/27/2003
that was so cute and sweet!
you're good. )
| youkai chick supreme chapter 1 . 7/30/2003
that was extremly weird.
| Tashana Ambrosia chapter 1 . 2/7/2003
This is just such a cool style of writing! I love the expressions. Great job! I love it!
| MuslimBarbie chapter 1 . 1/26/2003
funny and sweet!
| Sunder the Gold chapter 1 . 12/13/2002
I actually had no trouble figuring out who was who. Leaving out things like
Make it a little more confusing at first, but make it flow better with those things to get in the way. However, if its possible to type the words in different fonts or colors to distinguish the speakers, you might do that.
Good poem, except for Kagome's rather vulgar slip.
| AnimeDemon89 chapter 1 . 12/8/2002
| Hush Puppie chapter 1 . 12/7/2002
Mmmm. I like. I like, I like.
| SERENITY VIXEN chapter 1 . 11/22/2002
AT FIRST I READ THE FIRST PART THEN I WENT BACK TO THE WEBPAGE THEN I SAW SWEETER WHEN WE FUCK SO I CLICKED BACK AND THEN IREAD THE WHOLE THING KINDA QUESTIONABLE POEM
| warriorGL chapter 1 . 9/21/2002
a cute, nice romance pome with out getting messy with fluff
i like it!
| Talon skydragon chapter 1 . 8/28/2002
Aww, that was very sweet...and the simple style makes it strangely powerful. Love it.
| Lottie chapter 1 . 8/20/2002
I like it. It's cool.
| Shawna chapter 1 . 8/14/2002
i loved this one too! it was sooo cute