Reviews for Journal Entry 76 - Her Father
macy-terreth chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Holey. God. That was amazing.
brooklyn1shay2black3 chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
poor marcie!the way you wrote it made him sound like a really big dushbag!good story though,really unique
chozowarrior chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
Are you a Metroid fan? The 2nd last paragraph sounded like somthing from Metroid!
(I shot a ice beam at him in panic, but it had no effect.) Metroidy!
Anyway, Intresting! make more soon please!
LunaIsBestPrincess chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
The past tense of bend is bent not bended otherwise THIS WAS FREAKING EPIC
whitealmond chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
oh, so sad :,( I do wonder whatever happened to Marceline while she was a child... I really liked Simon's perspective :]
FreeSpiritV-1912 chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
OFFICIAL I Hate Hunson (poor Simon, Marcie is better with him, Ice King is not evil hes just a poor dork)
Very Good friend this make me Cry and very well writed. Also think Simon give the fries to Marcy and then BAM Hunson eats it

Bye And God Bless You
Antisociallonewolf123 chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
You have like, the power of James Patterson(?), Rick Riordan, and all the worlds best writers combined. You should really consider becoming an author. I'd buy a book you wrote.