Reviews for Forfeit
clovrboy chapter 5 . 10/25/2012
Peter is so koi. And does Derek like stiles too? Anyways update soon please
DerekStiles18 chapter 5 . 10/25/2012
POST MORE POST MORE! I like Derek/ Stiles but this story is interesting can you post more today.
Canceled4Good chapter 5 . 10/25/2012
GOD...I don't know how much longer I can take the teasing!...I really love this so far...update soon please!
clovrboy chapter 4 . 10/25/2012
They keep getting more adorable with each chapter. More please?
QT05 chapter 4 . 10/24/2012
That was really sweet of Peter. The drive-by kiss was a really good idea. I really do wish that there chapters were longer. You have such good ideas! You are able to write the characters so well. I don't want the chapters to ever come to an end. LOL.

Hopefully, in the near future, Peter and Stiles get to have some time alone and away from deadly supernatural creatures.

Really good job. Keep it up.
QT05 chapter 3 . 10/24/2012
I love all of these situations that you put Stiles and Peter in. It's sweet seeing Peter as the protector. And, hey, Stiles got a 'forfeit' for himself this time around!

I really wish that these chapters were longer. I think you could have done more with this scene. It would have been nice to know if Peter witnessed Stiles' victory dance or not.

Still very much enjoyed it.

Keep up the good work!
QT05 chapter 2 . 10/24/2012
Another short but sweet chapter.

It's nice to see Peter as the knight in shining armour instead of as the villain. The 'forfeit' insert was also very well placed and cute.

Great job!
QT05 chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
Yay! A Peter and Stiles fanfiction! I'm so happy to have stumbled upon this story. I always thought that those two characters could actually get along since they are similar in so many ways. Thanks for posting this!

For this first chapter, I think you have done a fantastic job. Everyone is in character. Clearly there's still trust issues between Scott and Derek. Scott and Issac are finding that they have quite a bit in common. But I think your description of Stiles and Peter was by far the best part. Both of those characters were extremely well written. They both acted just as I would expect them to based on what has been shown in the TV series. I love the way you kept Peter's creeper persona. The whole scene of him and Stiles was very amusing to read.

Really great job. Keep up the good work!
DerekStiles18 chapter 4 . 10/24/2012
post more!
Canceled4Good chapter 4 . 10/24/2012
clovrboy chapter 3 . 10/24/2012
Liking this story more with each passing chapter. Was glad that Peter actually wash stiles baby and that becoming a thing for them. I can hardly wait to see the others reactions please update soon.
MyHeroRaven chapter 3 . 10/23/2012
Haha! That was so great and funny! Lol

Is there really going to be knotting and dub con in here!? Those are two if my FAV things ;)
ZephyrTheBunny chapter 3 . 10/23/2012
I don't care for Peter all that much, but I'm really enjoying this!
Don'tBreakMyHeartAgain chapter 3 . 10/23/2012
i love this story, it seems like an actual nice peter x stiles is going to be just a nice peter and stiles fic riiight? lol
love the forfiet stiles gave peter.
peters gonna up his game with the forfeits soon isnt he, i cant wait for stiles' reaction
anyways great chapter absoultly love your story
update soon!
Canceled4Good chapter 3 . 10/23/2012
I completely love this story...I know you said there might not be smut in this but I really hopes it makes it in because Stiles and Peter sound really good in this fic...I definitely like this a lot...can't wait for the next update!
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