Reviews for Birthday, SURPRISE
1356-2478 chapter 2 . 9/15/2014
Oh, I can't wait to read more!
It's just like Boss to take something nice the Dukes do and turn it to bite 'em in the butt.
TheJediAvenger chapter 2 . 5/20/2013
Wow, This story is good! Also, your Asthma Attack story was just awesome! I have read some fanfic of The Dukes of Hazzard thats just awful! Yours could be made into the tv shows themselves!

wandamarie chapter 2 . 11/9/2012
loved it thanks hope you up date when you can thanks
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 2 . 11/9/2012
SORRY to hear about your brother hope he gets better.

o NO! What is Boss up to. Is he going to try and steal Daisys necklace or saying it was stolen.
wandamarie chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
loved it i am back sorry i am only aloud 2 hours on hear know
accounting professional chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
Great chapter. I loved the new way of talking. Please continue this story.
JadedPhoenixBurning chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
Very sweet.

As for the dialogue, "Happy birthday darlin'."

Dropping the G in it is just fine to help give the characters an accent. You balanced it out just fine. Many writers go over board and as you noticed yourself it can make them sound less intelligent rather than southern. (Though to be honest, the southern accent isn't the most intelligent sounding accent in the world! LOL!) But we all know that the Dukes were all very smart. :D

I'm glad to see that you are still writing. You have a lot of talent and show a lot of promise. :D
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
Nice b-day morning Daisy had. And gift the boys got for her.