Reviews for Unleashed: Wildfire
Guest chapter 8 . 12/4/2012
Go back to Demonic Problems of Epic Proportions on the other as you put it account.
Lucca36 chapter 8 . 11/27/2012
love the story! cant wait for the next update
dbzsotrum9 chapter 8 . 11/24/2012
hmmmm will Kushina be added to Naruto's harem? will Kushina beat the hell out of Minato for what he did (and he wouldn't be able to blame anyone else) :P

so Naruto will get a harem full of Older girls? could he also get Tayuya and Ayame?
Rickjames196 chapter 8 . 11/23/2012
yay, new chapter. Hhaaha what a boss, he knew where they at. Bwhaha he made sasgay faint. Should kicked his ass first. Poor rat, she gonna get terminated. Bwhahaa rat is a triple agent. Ouch, poor kibbles. Oh god kenshin eavesdropping on their girl talk. Scoooore for Naruto. Bwhahah oh god kyhahaha sexy substitution, that's fucking bad ass. Lulz poor shion. Tsu-chan is such a cheater. I dun think Naruto would have a problem with that XD. Hahaha he messing with kurotsuchi acting like if it's hiraishin. Stupid arse kurotsuchi . Hahah he holding back cuz he dun kill without a fight first . How noble of him. Bwhaha oh god he got a psycho side. ...I hate you frigging cliffy. Only reason I reviewed was cuz it was funny. I'm totally gonna stop reviewing cliff hangers \
jgreek chapter 8 . 11/23/2012
great story keep it up
The Lone Rurouni chapter 7 . 11/7/2012
A very good and interesting story so far. Any updates planned?
Rickjames196 chapter 7 . 10/25/2012
Nuuuuuuuuuuu this is just a preview of a future chapter. Fucken spoiler why'd you do that Y.Y
Rickjames196 chapter 6 . 10/25/2012
Bwhahaha motherfucker jiro got owned. LUlz anko named the tiger snaky chans? Or the fucker woke up her snakes too? Kyhahaha kenchin speech, I love it, that I do. XD 1HKO. Fuck yea, ryushosen that fucker. Hhaaha he told sakura to run. He gonna break the ass cutter? I hope he saves it for his hebi-hime. Awwww muramasa is dead? Ugh he shoulda send some protection with sakura. Bwhahaha he made ibiki use flee. Oh god anko told him no dice. He un know Naruto has a muramasa?
Rickjames196 chapter 5 . 10/25/2012
Hahahah should he be speaking in the open? He should let whorochi take care of minato. Kyhahaha akemi dun know kyu is a chick. Lulz temari hugged him. Crazy he deduced there was an invasion just cuz the sand sibs showed up. Sherlock got nothing on him. And it does make sense. Kage's children would be overpowered and trained by the best of the best. Which was only true with gaara in canon, and only cuz he was a jinchuriki. Lulz kotetsu and izumo made 'emselves look like jounin. Even if they get promoted 20 bucks say they still on guard duty. Kyhahaha he dropped a dattebayo. Kyhahaha shika likes his crappy hair. Lulz naru-chan lulz. Awww what bout ibiki . Uchiha be liking kyu cuz he got 'em red eyes. Kyhahaha sakura cost 'em 3 points. Lulz kyo cutting ass on him. Bwahahah gaara is all for killing and bathing, one night sleep isn't enough to stop his psychosis. Lulz he wanna be a fox sage.
Rickjames196 chapter 4 . 10/25/2012
Did kakashi and zabuzabu kill gato and his people after kakashi broke the honcho?Oh never mind, hiko killed gato xD. Lulz maelstrom bridge. Wtf konoha kidnapped mito and kushi. Wow so her getting kidnapped by kumo, was actually kumo trying to save her. Double fuck, this is bloody original. Gah fuck breaking the family. Konoha must pay. Does kyo know this shit? He fucking works for konoha... He better not let minato slide just cuz he found someone else to channel his anger to. Hhaha mito trained hiko? I hope Naruto revives her. If she was kidnapped the her marrige was a cham and hashirama was a dbag too... Awww three months and nothing? I hope he is in the planning stages or something... Kyhahaah he has the hots for her. Sucks he gotta let her grow first. Even if she is big she a widdle kid. It's cute that she is taller than his sealed self. Chunin exams are coming toooooo toooown Aww poor kono they un care cuz saru is dead. Jeez temari knew who he was . Kyhahaha he just told gaara he knows xd bad ass. Kyhahaha he knows ichibi's name? Lulz. MOTHER FUCVKHEHGEFEOFEJEFFFIHATEDFJ EFJYOUBITCHDKFDKFKLFGAHAAAHA AHFUUUUUUUUUCKDFDFDAMMIT that was a masterfully done cliffy. You played us before like you didn't know. Then you do this -RIPS OUT HAIR!-
Rickjames196 chapter 3 . 10/25/2012
Lame he gonna suck it up for his sister and mother -.- Let the angst begin... Glad at least kakashi isn't a min min fan boy. Epic fail, they fainted. Watch sasgay kill her for the mangekyo. Kyhahah kyo owned mizuki before he can ask her to steal the scroll? Oh he told kyo to kill his niece, frigging idjit. Hhaaha that bad ass had lunch with his niece . Totally bad for his rep/image. XD water prison'ed twice. Lulz Naruto gave kakashi a bad ass kunai. Dang, he saved sasgay... Damn he better not kill haku. He got kyo eyes? Bwhahaha they played poker after kakashi broke his sword? Fucken random. Lulz he made a kyuubi powered light saber? XD chakra poisoning. I hope he made it so only kakashi can wield it. I dun want sasgay stealing it... Awesome he has the reverse blade sword. So are there two battousai? Since kenshin was mentioned last chapter. But I already forgot what his relation was. LUlz shika likes Naruto cuz they can actually talk on the same level. Psh that wasn't really a cliffy but w.e I hope you never pull off a correct cliffy, then I won't rage I
Rickjames196 chapter 2 . 10/25/2012
Wow minata is a piece of shit. HAahaa I love samurai deeper kyo XD. Hhaahah that is what kyu did. I hope Naruto kills minato. I can't believe he ordered his sensei to kill Naruto...that puts him right there with fugaku...
Rickjames196 chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
Narukenshin Awww asses just sent him to the academy. Does he still know kage bushin and hiraishin? Hmmmn wonder why the chakra took his genius from him... So cute, he doesn't hate her like most fics where his parents pay attention to his sibling. ahaha he teaching her to not be a snob. So cute, he can talk to kyu since she is kinda his mum too I guess. Did she tell him why he became stupid? Or stop being a genius? Damn, is his baby sister gonna be treated like canon Naruto? He gonna needa protect her. XD ino is his fan girl. Kyhahaha class emo. Hiko is itachi? Oh sasgay just thinks it's itachi. Ohhh so his sensei going crazy made him stupid? xD. Oh snap, I was like wtf 31 years later? Is akemi in class with kono corps and hanabi? She is their age right? Just older looking. Poor inner sakura. Kyhahaha I feel like I just pressed fast forward . Fuck is that bitch doing in waves? Having tea, the odasity of this guy... Kyhahaha he is the mofo battousai. But he had whisker marks o.O or did they banish I 4got already -.- Seems good I hope you continue this. Not much competition so anyways you go is good... Wait, is itachi still in the leaf? I mean sasgay was blaming him. I doubt itachi would put up with that shit.
RedHound chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
I love this fic! Please go back and edit grammar mistakes though, because they would make to story so much better. I will help you beta this if you need help editing.
The-Most-Holy-Ogre chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
I barely got into the first chapter before i couldn't take it anymore. He would not have been able to talk to the Kyubi in the womb at all because he would not have conscious thought nor be able to communicate in anyway at all. And you said he mastered the kage bunshin and flying thunder god technique at the age of three. My three year old nephew just learned how to speak a full sentence there is no way in hell a three year could understand the insanely complex seal array need to utilize the Flying thunder god technique, and dont try to say he is a genius because that is hogwash. I know fan fictions are suppose to be worlds were you make the rules but at least have the courtesy to make it even remotely believable. Plus you need to work on your grammar and sentence structure this is shoddy at best.
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