Reviews for Magical Origins
Curt24 chapter 118 . 1/5
Hi I still hope to see harry and Lily end voldemort but they say patience is a virtue. Your story is still one of my all time favorites just how you made harry more aware of who he is. Also how you gave a rival who turned into friendship, love, to a partner who will always be there for him to the end. Well done.
Torhelm chapter 15 . 12/28/2022
I got to chapter 15 and I gotta say, this story sucks. Your "OC" as you call it is only there to steal Harry's best scenes while you make him a depressed idiot who doesn't even bother exploring his elemental powers, this isn't even considering how ignorant he is about the wizarding world even after you had him ask questions about it. You just put Harry in Slytherin to do nothing, while you put Lily in Gryffindor to do everything Harry does in canon with little to no changes. Not to mention the fact you have Lily's friend as Ron when he repeatedly shits on Harry for no reason. I can already see how the rest of this story will pan out, Lily saving Harry's ass everytime he gets in danger and making him look weak. Dumb story, wouldn't recommend from what I've read so far.
Nicolas Belasco chapter 118 . 12/20/2022
Hello. I love your stories but I was wondering when are you going to continue Avengers: Battleground? I love this story.
Guest chapter 62 . 12/15/2022
great story but its a shame you didn't write harry and daphne's first time
DrackNath chapter 118 . 12/14/2022
Reread the entire story and got to sayother thab the lemons being there alot and making me feel uncomfortable at times...i still think its a great story and love it very much :3 hope to see next chapter soon also for your WoW x Harry story as well XD i didnt know it was your story until i got to the latest chapter hahaha cant wait to try ur other stories and see if i like em just as much as ur Aspect of the Wolf and Magical origins
asdasd chapter 36 . 12/2/2022
Did you actually forget the part where they tried to kill him?
asdasd chapter 34 . 12/2/2022
Ah yes and now we are back to the lets not do anything about anyone ever because its totally fine they try to enslave and steal his legacy after all... First the Dursleys and now this shit.
asdasd chapter 33 . 12/2/2022
...I can already see the chapter when Ron becomes Harry's best friend and marries you OC who replaced Harry. Are you fucking kidding me right now? They tried murder him. This is isn't about closing a chapter in your life but about murderers getting what they deserve...
asdasd chapter 29 . 12/2/2022
Their "relationship" is amazing? Are you actually reading the contrived BS you write? She's a hypocritical bitch who constantly takes the side of selfish lying bigots while verbally abuses and sometimes physically attacks Harry...
asdasd chapter 25 . 12/2/2022
Why the fuck are they friends anymore at this point? She literally just tried to burn him to fucking death...
asdasd chapter 13 . 12/2/2022
Jesus fucking Christ are you serious right now? Shes totally fine with being told an 11 year old should die because hes dark but calling the said moron who said that a moron and suddenly she gets upset about it? You literally just inserted you OC BS into Harry's place, made Ron over the top bigot and somehow Harry is her friend? What chapter is Ron redeemed and Harry apologizing how he mistreated him? Because fuck this is pathetic...
asdasd chapter 12 . 12/2/2022
Again... Why the fuck is she friends with this rat?
asdasd chapter 11 . 12/2/2022
So this "Lily" is the self insert then? Literally just replaced Harry and follow cannon? Also why is she friends with your Ron?
asdasd chapter 9 . 12/2/2022
And now this is literally just cannon with a different MC...
asdasd chapter 8 . 12/2/2022
Why did he lie for her? She literally ditched him the first chance she got earlier and if the professor hadn't arrived when he did he would have been beaten up instead because of it. Is this seriously going to be constant f cking abuse of the MC and he just takes it and somehow thinks the abusers are his friends?
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