Hmm, good story in general. The biggest issue I have is that it isnt connecting that well, but that might be innevitavle with 12 years from first update.
Wished you picked Daphne or Lillian as the sole romantic interest, but it is still a good story

Really impressed here.
It is always making my head hurt when Draco is a bully and it’s fine. Making the obvious connection that Lucius is actually pretending to be a good guy was really nice to see. Hope the next 100 chapters is just as good

Gunny dying here stupidly is the best thing I've read in this fic

No offense author, it would be cooler if Hermione didn't become a part of Harry's harem here in this story and the sex scene is actually disgusting no offense but I really do like Killing Ginny here in this fic

yoooooo wtf im dumb as hell, just now realising that Horvath and Glorenstein are from sorcerers apprentice XD

please update the winter king story

Geez, what a wanker, can't figure out your own story so got to con us into figuring it out.

ehhh? I agree with the badger and eagle being aligned with earth and air, but lion and fire? Where's that coming from? Serpent and water, maybe if we're talking about like chinese folklore, but ehhhhh? Good story so far but I think the houses just suit their personalities more than "they fit their element."

I hope the story is not abandoned

Love this story. Hope you continue writing and looking fowards to the next chapter

Hi Dante 2k-25 still hoping to see a new chapter of your story in magical origins. It's still my favourite one of your stories amount them since in you give them really awesome plots. As well as your other stories keep up the awesome work hope to see more

This is a new and original version. I have truly enjoyed reading it. Please update soon

This is still a rather poorly written chapter I'm sorry to say. You have significant issues with verb tense through the entire chapter. You have had issues with this on and off through the whole story, but this chapter was especially bad, to the point I nearly didn't finish reading the chapter, truth be told. You have a number of points where word order is strange as well. In the part where the fake Moody is revealed, you have Harry force him back into his true form, causing the eye to pop out of his head and the leg to fall off. But then when Dumbledore is there to question him, he casts a spell to force the fake Moody back into his true body, causing the eye to pop out of his head and leg to fall off a second time. On top of all this, how did the wands lock up? In the books, the wands share the brother core which is how they lock up and manage to force Voldemort's wand to send out the phantoms. In your story, Harry doesn't have a brother wand to Voldemort, so in theory, they shouldn't have locked up like that.

When does it ever say the world cup for quiddich was every four years? In the Goblet of Fire, the only thing I recall being every four years was the Tri-Wizard tournament before it was canceled.

This is gonna get finished right ?