Reviews for The potions master and the potions prince
CurlyFries01 chapter 4 . 3/11
You really need to make some of the paragraphs smaller. its just too hard to read otherwise! i find that no more than 5-6 lines is best - it makes the story much easier to read, especially as its online, and will keep people's attention on the story. If there is something important in the middle of the block, its very easy to miss, because it just gets lost in the middle of all that text. :) Keep up the good story though!
AlwaysASlytherin chapter 23 . 2/16
Loved the story and I'm very happy that Harry got the happiness he so deserves. Thank you for sharing.
BSolomon chapter 23 . 2/4
This was avery good story and it is well writet looking forward to your next story
Laurenmk20 chapter 15 . 12/23/2013
I myself would have been stuck between teddys parents and fred, but thats just cuz i love fred lol. That and im sure it (as much as i love remus) was good tht the marauders were finally back together, but your right teddy needs his parents
serenityselena chapter 23 . 10/16/2013
awesome story :)
firebolthallow1572 chapter 23 . 10/15/2013
This was great story that deserve a sequel don't you think?
horsesrules chapter 23 . 9/10/2013
it was good
rowenasheir chapter 23 . 9/4/2013
Ok but how would the finances work out?
Caramelloangel chapter 20 . 9/3/2013
Wait i just noticed something now sev is freaking 20 odd years older than harry and practically the same age as his parents. Holy shizzz
SlashyMcGee chapter 23 . 9/1/2013
sequel?
Venus914 chapter 7 . 8/26/2013
Fred shouldn't have died in mg opinion. Rowling should have kept him alive and killed Ron in his place...or Ginny.
bluekitnaru chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
spacing needs work but I do like how its going and was that lady McGonagall
Jamie Theobald chapter 23 . 4/23/2013
Awwwww i want a sequel now... i mean who is fred with, what is the sex of Harry and Sevs baby? Do lily anf james have more kids? You cant just end the story there...
Jamie Theobald chapter 22 . 4/23/2013
Oh i would cry sooo hard if Harry woke in yhe next chapter and found out it was a dream...
Jamie Theobald chapter 21 . 4/23/2013
Ewwwww imagine your parents watching you with your significant other... ewww
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