Reviews for Permission
Khaleesi95 chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
At first I thought that Loki wouldn't be Thor's brother in this one; I wouldn't mind it, but I think that the fact that Loki is his brother after all made this fic more emotional. I really like the fact that Loki doesn't just tell Thor who he is but shows him, hoping that Thor will recognize him.

-"I won't lose you again."
-"Seal it with a kiss?"
-"How about a bite?"
I absolutely loved that dialogue. And the ending.

Long story short, I absolutely loved this! Kudos.
Sumi Anzu chapter 1 . 4/8/2014
I read it once. i got confuse about the vampire outside, whether or not loki is dead, and if the vampire is loki, or is there two separate individual named loki.
but very interesting in twisted good way
Ruby of Raven chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
Hm... Looks like everyone's a vampire now... Sure! I'll let you guys in! Let's have threesome!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
This is beautiful! I love it! Well done on the characters, they're really good!
CodeLyoko chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
The interaction between the two was just so sweet at the end.
BeautifulDesertFoxglove chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
Hehe, I looked out my window during the last paragraph and screamed when i saw my two neighbors looking in.
Helen5901 chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Wow! This was great!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2013
hahaha...oh you can coming anytime
VengefulMothSlayer chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
THAT WAS SO COOL OHMYGAWD, i loved it.
Loki makes a cool vampire...
I loved the ending! way better than twilight.
No offense to you friend or anything, but I don't really like the fanart... Loki looks like he's in his fifties.
Still, awesome story!
Kneels4Loki chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
Ohh Loki would make a great vampire. I almost wanted him not to be Thor's brother in this for some reason. Don't know why it took me a bit to figure it out. I like the end, how they're coming for us (and we'd want them too) :)
qartvubhnj chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
Beautiful.
ShoelessKayla chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Everything you write is g
Skarlettefox chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
This was great!
See! Persistance is a virtue!...wait...XD
Breyito-Black-Lupin chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Okey...that was odd, but spectacular! ;)
I really liked it. The way Loki tried to show Thor who he is, but not telling him, just waiting Thor realised it...
And the black humor was a plus ;P

Kiss!
Lord L.H.J chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
LOL,I WOULD TOTALLY LET THEM IN,but i'm already a vampire.
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