|Reviews for Leaving|
| DKougar chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
This shows a really good grasp of canon & Michael's interior dialogue. I think you are correct in saying that, at first, Michael only saw military service as a fast ticket out of Miami; a decent job with room & board included.
I like the atmospheric detail you use to help us BE there in the action & I wish this had been a bit longer, more fleshed out.
Look forward to more BN postings from you. Thanks