Reviews for Pierced Heart
Skwrl chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
Very good!
It's a shame that there aren't that many fics about Mokou and Kaguya, since their hate/hate, love/hate or whatever realtionships the author decides to write are always interesting and nice to read.
Hmm, and now I must look for that doujin and read it.
Please write more great fics like this! :)
Skwrl, a passing Troper
Psykoakuma chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
Wow! Clever, unusual, exciting, and the characters were delightful.
I would have enjoyed slightly more overtly romantic elements, but I find these two fascinating under just about any circumstances.

I actually know the doujin in question, and strangely enough Kaguya yelling 'no' was my favorite moment as well.

The only part of this story that seems crazy is the assertion that Kaguya or Mokou are not that interesting. This is simply unacceptable.

assert (Mokou ! interesting);
program: Pierced Heart.c:201: main: Assertion Mokou ! interesting' failed.
Abort (core dumped)