Reviews for Make Things Better (The Second Time Around)
AnonyMouse chapter 1 . 10/12/2016
I always figured Dudley had what it takes to be a Hitman and that he really did care for Harry in a deeply twisted way.
RainyDayReader116 chapter 1 . 9/14/2016
I love your writing!
Love2read23 chapter 1 . 5/20/2016
oh my gosh.
Heksy chapter 1 . 5/12/2016
Jesse chapter 1 . 4/2/2016
I'm not normally a fan of Dudley and I was a bit weary going in reading this story, but your summary sounded interesting so I figured I'd give it a shot. I'm glad I did. This is a good story. I like Harry using Dudley as a back-up plan and Dudley getting even with Malfoy.
Korvon chapter 1 . 12/5/2015
This is bloody fantastic, I mean horrible and sad too (poor Harry) but I loved it all the same.
KioshiUshima chapter 1 . 6/8/2015
Nice. very, very nice.
HerosnMira chapter 1 . 12/29/2014
I've been looking for your story for forever.
Amber Jack chapter 1 . 11/16/2014
That was different, I liked it.
Akayuki Novak chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
This is a bit sick, but at the same time I love it... is that normal?
Qwerty124 chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
He did Harry. He did.
Rianne.S chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
FUCKING LOVE, THE ENDING! Awesome many a sequel or something, many with Harry not using magic any more and joining dudly with his work, by becoming an assassin , and then SHIELD recruits them for avengers?
She-Who-Lives-in-TheMadhouse chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
A little unfinished, and, I believe, everybody would like to know what was done to Harry (and to Malfoy, for that matter) in more detail, but I still like this.
DearlyFictitious chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
When I read what Harry said, I actually had a creepy smile on my face and started to laugh...

I really do hope you consider making a follow up :D
shenmi meiren chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
I hope he screamed, too!
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