|Reviews for Make Things Better (The Second Time Around)|
| AnonyMouse chapter 1 . 10/12/2016
I always figured Dudley had what it takes to be a Hitman and that he really did care for Harry in a deeply twisted way.
| RainyDayReader116 chapter 1 . 9/14/2016
I love your writing!
| Love2read23 chapter 1 . 5/20/2016
oh my gosh.
| Heksy chapter 1 . 5/12/2016
| Jesse chapter 1 . 4/2/2016
I'm not normally a fan of Dudley and I was a bit weary going in reading this story, but your summary sounded interesting so I figured I'd give it a shot. I'm glad I did. This is a good story. I like Harry using Dudley as a back-up plan and Dudley getting even with Malfoy.
| Korvon chapter 1 . 12/5/2015
This is bloody fantastic, I mean horrible and sad too (poor Harry) but I loved it all the same.
| KioshiUshima chapter 1 . 6/8/2015
Nice. very, very nice.
| HerosnMira chapter 1 . 12/29/2014
I've been looking for your story for forever.
| Amber Jack chapter 1 . 11/16/2014
That was different, I liked it.
| Akayuki Novak chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
This is a bit sick, but at the same time I love it... is that normal?
| Qwerty124 chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
He did Harry. He did.
| Rianne.S chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
FUCKING LOVE, THE ENDING! Awesome many a sequel or something, many with Harry not using magic any more and joining dudly with his work, by becoming an assassin , and then SHIELD recruits them for avengers?
| She-Who-Lives-in-TheMadhouse chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
A little unfinished, and, I believe, everybody would like to know what was done to Harry (and to Malfoy, for that matter) in more detail, but I still like this.
| DearlyFictitious chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
When I read what Harry said, I actually had a creepy smile on my face and started to laugh...
I really do hope you consider making a follow up :D
| shenmi meiren chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
I hope he screamed, too!