Reviews for DARKER GREY
tstines chapter 24 . 4/24/2014
I can't stand Elena! She needs to be taken down ever time she comes around. Given her a hard time each time, she wouldn't come around anymore!
jnie3 chapter 24 . 4/24/2014
argh..can't stand Elena. glad that Christian is throwing both of them out from his apartment.
ps - just realised i gave wrong review for chapter 23..hehe. my apologies.
So David is the culprit Jealous and angry?
pookiebear3 chapter 24 . 4/24/2014
Way to tell her off Christian !
kelmal chapter 24 . 4/24/2014
Another great chapter.
1961Littlemissy chapter 23 . 3/9/2014
Waiting for more.
truefeather77 chapter 23 . 3/6/2014
This hasn't been updated in almost a month - you are coming back, right? I'd love to know what happens in this story, and solve the mystery of Stalker David, see if Ana's mom and her machinations manage to ruin anything, if Christian's ideas ever advance as far as the 20th century (they can work on 21st after they're at least living together), etc.
Cynthia74 chapter 23 . 2/17/2014
Please update soon.
ilovechristianandgideon chapter 23 . 2/13/2014
Just found this story… love it
truefeather77 chapter 23 . 2/12/2014
Creepier and creepier. Dave is too strange, and Carla must be oblivious if he can ransack Ana's room and she doesn't even notice.

Very eager to find out what happens. Thanks!
shan36 chapter 24 . 2/11/2014
Oh goodness what is wrong with David...he is acting very very cray cray. Great chapter!
maxine59 chapter 24 . 2/11/2014
love your story update soon
R-J briggs chapter 24 . 2/11/2014
Great chapter
RUBIWHO chapter 8 . 2/11/2014
Loving the story so far...can u send me the pinterest link..thabk you
horses1029 chapter 24 . 2/11/2014
I'm so glad yiu updated. Great chapter and can't wait for their reunion in Seattle
greyfan 79 chapter 24 . 2/11/2014
So glad you updated can't wait for more xxx
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