|Reviews for One last smile|
| Ruby of Raven chapter 1 . 6/16
Yay! They both made it through okay. XD
| AngelRuby235 chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
Very beautiful n ver wish ds was animated.
| Violet Abilene chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
Oh wow. This is really good. You really did a great job getting inside the head of Misaki. His actions, words and thoughts are very in character and accurate. This really is a very VERY good fic!
| shingekinoaddict chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
damnit that scared me! I thought Saru was a goner...
I love the angst. great job. :'
| black.heart.substitute chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
I like it. Have you considered a second chapter? It would be interesting to see where Yata and Fushimi's relationship goes after this near death experience.
| Composingjealousy chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
This was just... I can't even put into words! I love it! ;A; I actually cried! I love Misaki and Saruhiko they are my OTP! Amazing job on this!
| XMistressChaosx chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
I don't do this often, but damn after two fics I'm offically in love. Thank you so much! This ship has so many feels and hot damn if I don't write a fic one day with these two (I doubt it'll ever be to your caliber), I promise. Anyways, I'm rambling, hehe. I loved everything like seriously. I was in tears. They're so beautiful together. Gods! Too many feels to be normal. This isn't even SasuNaru! Wah.
Lovely one-shot. Just totally awesome. I hate my review but I hope I brought a smile (if only a little) to your face. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Till Next Time,
| CheckeredShirts chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
This was perfectly done, it was such a good read. I'm now left wanting more, I need to know more. Time to re-read! :'3
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
I appreciate your work! I had good time reading it! Thank you sincerly!
| Animecherryblossem33 chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
This was incredibly sad and wonderful all that the same time :') Other than a few grammar mistakes it was really well written and the emotions you captured were beautiful 3 Amazing job! Loved it!
| friesianone chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
Wow! This is really well-written and the imagery is so vivid and great! The emotions are so raw and pure and deep, and the descriptions are just really amazing! I'm happy that Fushimi didn't die, and the ending is so cute! I was really about to cry after the part where Yata falls unconscious. I love this pair3 Amazing writing! XD
| lollipop-mania chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
all the awards.
(to note: the tension was really well written, and the images displayed when yata is remembering how they used to be (and the mentions of totsuka!) were completely heart wrenching. you could really feel fushimi's betrayal).
| Mishaa chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
(I hate how I feel like I've already written a review for this but I don't see my name on the reviews page.)
Possibly the best dramatic Sarumisa fic I've read to date. And to think you wrote this around episode 3. They haven't even interacted yet! Genius to have made this up with what little material was available then.
Another cool thing is, it sound so canon! Fushimi and Yata were so IC, this could really pass off as something canon. Or maybe that's just the SaruMisa fangirl in me talking.
Your plot is /sweet/. And I'm complimenting your writing / concept. The content itself is not sweet at all. Rather depressing, actually. But who cares, right? I love the angst! Drown me in more, please! SaruMisa angst is welcome any tme.
I also applaud your take on their relationship. Amaaazing. Episode 5 hadn't come out yet, so I'm amazed at your foresight. More or less 2 episodes after you wrote this - with major revelations occurring - and it still corresponds to the story!
New headcanon. This is exactly how they'll meet their end: through each other.
I don't really care how that sort of matches the implied thing going between Kuroh/Shiro (referring to how Shiro said he'd die only by Kuroh's hand).
This is a great fic and I hope to read more of your SaruMisa's soon!
| inactiveasdfjkl chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Wait, no, that can't be it. The status cannot be "complete". I need moaaar D;
I hope to read a sequel to it in the near future :) and I very much enjoyed the fanfic!
| Nameles chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
At first I have to thanks you for making the first K fanfic I read and make me want to read more (I was having problems to find some, and I was kind of scared, so I guess I have to thank you).
I hope you write more K fanfics and post them here, 'cause, man, you're really god at it!