Reviews for The Demon Within
jaconda chapter 1 . 8/22/2014
Sorry I repeated myself. It looked like it hadn't accepted it.
jaconda chapter 1 . 8/22/2014
I'd like to say a few things about that Doctor Who crossover. The Doctor does not use words like bloody. Just because he has an English accent does not mean he swears. His usual methods don't involve throwing people into other dimensions and leaving them to die. And he's been standing up to murderers, and mass murderers, since the sixties.
jaconda chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
I'd like to say something about Time space and madness. The Doctor has never said the word bloody. Just because he has an English accent does not mean he swears. His usual methods don't involve throwing people into other dimensions and leaving them to die. And he's been standing up to murderers, and mass murderers, since the sixties. If he's a murderer why has Doctor Who, or it's writers, never said so?
Rini-D chapter 3 . 8/28/2013
. has this been continued? is there a new link? where can I read it if it has? (link please!)

If it hasn;t been continued, then please do. please please please!
Averon The Awesome chapter 3 . 3/25/2013
Yeah! Prease hurry!
Averon The Awesome chapter 2 . 11/25/2012
Poor Squee. His teddy bear's gonna turn him into a psycopath.
ZinkRadke chapter 2 . 11/20/2012
Hey, considering this is your first story, you did pretty good. :) Can't wait for chapter 3!