Reviews for What Might Have Been
Niamh2816 chapter 13 . 5/26/2013
Thanks for the explanation :)
God that was awful cringy :P
Love the story though :)
Keep going :)
Clara Meliza chapter 13 . 5/26/2013
I really, really hope things remain the same between them and Katniss' drunken questions on self-pleasure fail to add any sort of awkwardness towards their hunting-partner dynamic. However, you have - slowly, but surely - managed to coax Katniss out of her rock-hard shell and turn her into somewhat of a teenage girl. Sort of. She is still as oblivious as always, and that will probably never change, but at least now she is aware of her hormones and not the motionless robot that Suzanne Collins made her out to be. And for that, I applaud you. Bravo!
Potterhead2015 chapter 13 . 5/26/2013
GlassHeart1993 chapter 13 . 5/26/2013
That was great! I love this story! My only criticism is that the gap between updating is way to long. Looking forward to the next chapter, and the bit with the reaping and Rory :)
Ellenka chapter 13 . 5/26/2013

And subtle and awesome awkward and i loved the rebellious interaction with Haymitch and excuse me i'm drunk on OTP feels, so AWWWWWWW :D
laurier1122 chapter 12 . 5/25/2013
OMG. what a great story!
I love the way you write and can't wait for it to continue :)

Guest chapter 9 . 5/14/2013
You have really brought out the family man/oldest brogher aspect of Gale, GOOD JOB D
Guest chapter 5 . 5/14/2013
I like how you showed the darker and edgier side of district 12. It is very realistic. Maybe go into a bit more detail into the story and a bit more descriptive.
Sarah chapter 12 . 5/11/2013
3 nice :)
YayPercabeth123 chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
I reread your story a lot. I enjoy how it is very well-written and how it emphasizes on how Katniss couldn't see the things that were happening around her. Your story has a strong structure and its plot seems to be going somewhere. Keep on writing!
bohobo chapter 12 . 5/9/2013
I've been falling behind, but omg I'm hooked again!
I love all the Haymitch parts with him being such a knob. So in character! And I'm friggin glad she's staying with the Hawthornes! The poker game was funny and they fully had the chance to kiss! And I know Gale sure as hell wanted it! But I still liked how things turned out. I like Thom. Only as a platonic friend to Katniss though... obviously...
I love how they all get along so easily, with her little chat to Rory about Gale. And so glad the ho bag is gone. As much as I like the drama, she had to leave. And now Gale being all broody and pensive. I LOVE IT!
Also Katniss trying to comfort him was adorable.
I just love your writing. And I've missed this story... I can't wait for the next chapter!
To be a rebel chapter 12 . 4/30/2013
AHHHHH. He knows He knows He knows He knows. He knows he loves her! Thank you. No more Maura. I loved the last part too. Awesome. Lol I barely even know what to say right now - so happy.
FirePearl97 chapter 12 . 4/30/2013
Loved it! In dying to know what Maura said to gale and if it had to do with katniss...great job!
Mooglez chapter 12 . 4/29/2013
Oh my god - that 'I volunteer' teaser on your tumblr. I seriously need that chapter, like, yesterday. It's going to be so far away :'(. If Rory's stepping forward, then Gale's volunteering... is it even Gale? Is it a reaping? Oh my gosh... is it Thom? Argh I'm going to be thinking about it until you update haha
PepperRocks chapter 12 . 4/29/2013
This story is one of my Gale x Katniss fanfiction ever. It is well written, it describes the events clearly without boring the reader with a lot of details. I simply love the way you portray Katniss and Gale without making them to OCC. The idea with the mining accident was also smart because usually authors around here don't test their relationship in these kind of events. Well done and keep up the good work!
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