Reviews for What Might Have Been
sheika2000 chapter 13 . 1/1/2014
O-Kay this chapter is kinda awkward
sheika2000 chapter 7 . 12/30/2013
Can u put a scene where gale walks to the fence but katniss hears a hum "gale!" She says pulling him he turns around and falls on top of her "whAt!?" He asks using his elbows to support him, their faces inches away.
"The sheild is on" she says, breathing heavily
" I think I would've heard it" he says
U can add some stuff
Guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
So, I made the worst mistake in my life by reading your story. I'm going back and forth.. Reading some chapters again and again. Its rare for me to find something that you end up reading and it makes you feel so emotionally imbalanced. WHAT have you done to me!?
Because MY GOD!
You are so fucking amazing! I want to slap you and kiss you senseless at the same time.
wehaveaproblem chapter 17 . 12/24/2013
Okay, so I just binge-read all 17 chapters in like three days and was like devastated when I scrolled down to the bottom of the page and figured out it was the last chapter. You have such a knack for creating cliffhangers and it's so terrible but awesome. Keep going! I can't wait for the Galeniss to officially happen.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
Heyy , I found this story only yeasterday and so far is one of the best stories I have ever read. I really hope you update soon because I will go crazy if you give up or something ! I can't wait to see more developement at Katniss and Gale relationship and at the revolution don't hurt Rory ,you would broke my heart if you did... Soooo that's all I had to say,you're a geat writer and you should update soon
gossgal33 chapter 17 . 12/22/2013
yeah his just found this story and I love it and you better update soon because that cliffie is killing me slowly xoxo okay hope to see an update soon! (p.s don't kill Rory, I beg of you!) xoxo
Lemon-Drop2400 chapter 17 . 12/16/2013
This cliffhanger will be the death of me, honest to god. Continue this story please!
Prettie Parker chapter 17 . 12/15/2013
I really hope your update soon! I'm absolutely in love with this story. It's beautifully written and feels very in character for everyone.
leighhawthorne chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
I just adore this story, please update sometime soon :)

AmazingPerson chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
It is now december and i would like to tell you that i have unfollowed you, and i will not be carrying on reading your story anymore. Sorry, I just feel like i cannot give support to a writer that doesnt update regularly. So sorry not sorry..
RadientWings chapter 17 . 12/13/2013
Seriously, I need more of this absolutely fantastic and wonderful fic O_O
Arnith87 chapter 17 . 12/10/2013
Thank you so much for sharing this story! I'm really enjoying it. It's detailed and believable and has the fulfilled romance I wished for in canon. I especially like how you've handled the characterizations of Gale and Katniss. I love how you've handled Gale's feelings of fear and impotency without making him a blindly angry character who justifies himself with love for Katniss rather than taking responsibility for his actions and feelings. I also love that Katniss is still independent to a fault, reserved, and practical but is learning to accept help. I'm glad she is able to slowly grow beyond her anxieties and she and Gale (and she and others) are learning to communicate and accept feelings honestly despite traumatic experiences. You've been honest with the characters without letting them become one dimensional. I'm so impressed that you've done all this while also fleshing out supporting characters and moving a plot beyond the romance.(but I love the romance and how it's slow and steadily growing). I'm glad you've included the games and seem to be moving towards a post-Capitol resolution. I don't think gale or Katniss would be totally happy without resolving the terrible world circumstance and I'm excited to see how it is done. Thanks again for the story so far I've had a great time reading. I hope you'll have the opportunity to finish it.
Mariana chapter 17 . 12/9/2013
Love this story! Just read all de chapters in one day! Can't wait for an update
Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
Great story ! Plz uptade soon ...
Elenahahaha chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
I loved the massage part ,it was fun and hot! I can't wait for a rebellion to come and of course Katniss and Gale to kiss ... I really want to know what is going to happend to Rory ,you got me very worried when I was reading that part .plz uptade soon ,I love this story and I can't wait to see more !
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