Reviews for Anatomy (of a Butterfly)
amr56 chapter 8 . 11/11/2015
I like this a lot. I liked the point you bring up: "The argument could be made that his team was a prime example of why ninja should not put their trust in" first impressions. That is a very good, extremely interesting point. It makes me think of Team 10 differently, for some reason. They always did have so much potential; I wonder what exactly they are capable of.

I, of course, really liked following the blooming relationship between Ino and Chouji. Thank you for sharing this!
EndlessLoveEternally chapter 8 . 9/26/2014
Love it!
YungHime chapter 8 . 6/24/2014
Awh I loved this!
Miss Ashlynn chapter 8 . 5/17/2014
This was extremely well written! Great job!
Fanwoman chapter 7 . 8/1/2013
Aw! So much story in so few words!
Fanwoman chapter 6 . 8/1/2013
Fans annoyingly overlook Choji so much, forgetting he's from one of the four great clans of Konoha and the first of the Rookies to kill. I like how this touched on that and more.
Fanwoman chapter 5 . 8/1/2013
Thoughtful, amusing, sweet.
Fanwoman chapter 4 . 8/1/2013
Interesting, how it's a cerebral exercise for him.
Fanwoman chapter 3 . 8/1/2013
So sad and sweet at the same time.
Fanwoman chapter 2 . 8/1/2013
I recognize him by his big heart and unbending loyalty, but yeah, he has brawn down pat.

I like that this one's not as dark. The line about Gai, "out of pity or fear," made me laugh.
Fanwoman chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Love the comparison, though I wouldn't dub one of the noble clans of Konoha as an "unassuming journeyman class shinobi line." This is so poignant for something so short.
Fluffbeast chapter 8 . 6/5/2013
I'm glad you decided not to keep the final chapter to yourself, its probably my favorite!
anon chapter 8 . 5/29/2013
wow. sweet and sexy all in one. nice way to wrap this up!
anon chapter 7 . 5/29/2013
seriously, what are you doing to me?! the feels man, the feels!
anon chapter 6 . 5/29/2013
this was beautiful... got me right in the feels
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