Reviews for Friendship Afire |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story. Thank you for the epilogue it was wonderful. And for me I wouldn't mind if you would write a historical story. But I wouldn't mind any of them they all sound wonderful. Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVED THIS! Seriously, it has been one of my favorite stories. I'm sad it had to end, but what a great ending it was! Thank you so much for writing this and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. |
![]() ![]() I love this story. I just wonder if you think to publish it someday. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A lovely story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'Twas a delightful story. Thank you for sharing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Captain Wentworth! Lovely story. I am so glad Elizabeth finally realised she forgave him and that life with him was worth more than life without him. Poor man made a terrible mess of things, but at least he swiftly realised it and sought to make amends as soon as he could. Love the little improprieties of their relationship. |
![]() ![]() This last chapter is a big No-No for me! I like mixing partners, but main partners for Jane Austen novels end up together. Just as Mr. Darcy will always be for Elizabeth, Captain Wentworh will be the only one for Anne Elliott! The woman waited for 8 years to reunite with her greatest love. I'd say that hers is even a deeper love than Lizzy's! No No No! This may be fanfiction, but do not mess with Frederick and Anne! ...Now that I got that off my chest, except for this last chapter, great job! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving the story. I am really enjoying the interactions between lizzie and Darcy. Just a little thing I've noticed, in the middle of this chapter you change to writing in the present tenseand swap back tenses later on. |
![]() ![]() do you think to publish this story, maybe on Amazon or so ? It would be really nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good history but one thing is very-very strange. Why Darcy think bad about Lizzy after his refusal of Collins? Collins is very ridicoulos, her refusal only show her taste. and legibility. Other poison must be much better - for example Lizzy like Colonel, but he has not much money. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So there's still Lizzy and Darcy's epilogue... When are we going to see that? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't see the end coming. At all. And I don't mean that it somehow surprised me, it just seemed like the story ended very suddenly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't get the use of "momma". It sounds like a child speaking, and much less formal than Mother. Perhaps they uses "momma" in the books? |