|Reviews for The Holocron|
| Shattered-Destiny00 chapter 3 . 1/1
Nice AU! Me likey!
Keep it up!
| Mad about the Boro chapter 3 . 12/17/2013
Nice, though I noticed several spelling errors throughout (mainly in names & planets, but some general errors as well; I'd recommend having someone proof read it for you). Other than that it is a great fic so far. Keep up the good work.
| Jedi Angel001 chapter 3 . 12/15/2013
I am really liking this story, using an halocron of Revan to teach Anakin is great.
Loved the story of Anakin choosing Vader as his name. Keep up the good work.
| Above the Winter Moonlight chapter 3 . 12/15/2013
Very good story so far. I really do love this story so far. Update soon.
| edboy4926 chapter 3 . 12/14/2013
Interesting in making Vader's story into an old tale.
By the way, you wrote Coruscant wrong.
| JACarter chapter 3 . 12/14/2013
| Jedi Master Misty Sman-Esay chapter 3 . 12/14/2013
A few misspelled words but honestly I do that and that whoever created "spell check" will get a kiss from me in the Afterlife.
I liked the story that Anakin took his alias from. Very reminiscent of parts of RotS through ANH, TESB and RotJ.
| Goodalwayswins98 chapter 3 . 12/14/2013
| skygawker chapter 2 . 11/11/2013
Very interesting concept! I'm intrigued to see where you go with this. I've always liked the concept of holocrons, and this story looks to use them in an interesting way. There are a few distracting spelling errors though, especially in the first chapter (misspelling Toydarian, Sebulba, straightened, Coruscant, won't, and a couple missing commas). Other than that, keep up the good work!
| readsalot2002 chapter 2 . 5/6/2013
great start I hope to see more.
| Zaxxon chapter 2 . 4/5/2013
Would love to see how this Anakin deals with what's to come, given Revan's teaching.
| Mad about the Boro chapter 2 . 3/31/2013
Excellent, I hope to see more in the future.
| Mad about the Boro chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
Nice, though there are a few spelling mistakes (e.g. you misspelled Coruscant, etc) bit overall, not a bad start.
| Beloved Daughter chapter 2 . 2/19/2013
An absolutely fascinating alternate world of Star Wars - I can't wait to see what you will come up with next!
| NarutoXKyuubiXlovers21 chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
I am willing to bet that it is either HK47 or Revan's armour