Reviews for fortune cookies
Shaper of Winds chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
Lex Fowler chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
That's a bit...creepy. Not what I've normally seen from you. But it's absolutely true.
MostDefinitelyFlorentine chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Your poetry can be so dark. It worries me. You go straight from *deathdeathsorrowsorrowdeathd eath* to something along the lines of: PASS THE CHEETOS, BITCH.
IamNyssaDaughterofHephaestus chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
Nice poem. Why isn't Nemesis listed...?
avenglr chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
mcfuz chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
Oooh. I love freeverse. This was nice. I like how you sort of conveyed Nemesis' bitterness here.
doe-eyed llama chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
ugh, i swear, your freeverses are legendary my dear, /legendary/.

interesting freeverse, definitely the first one i've read about nemesis, since, as you stated in the summary, isn't listed as a character.

" {but not enough to spare even your not-so-little boy} "

ugh my love for ethan is like nico x leo divided by luke so adfghjekalfdm love. just love darling.
wombat-of-awesomeness chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
Wow, she really doesn't have a character slot? Anywho, I loved this, and she's a very interesting character to examain, good job!