|Reviews for Fault Lines|
| spnfan44 chapter 3 . 1/15
I totally agree with you!? This was MUCH better than the series handled it!? The whole idea that Sam would just 'not look' for Dean is dumb and way out of character. Excellent plot and way to mesh all those pesky plot threads!
| Frakking Toasters chapter 3 . 11/10/2013
I really like this explanation for "the year!" xo
| Aranna Undomiel chapter 3 . 5/26/2013
yay, more AUverse :D
And it was pretty awesome too! Loved how you took all the original plotlines and mixed them all together into much better and even more plausible ways. Great twists, with Benny and Crowley working together. Though I have to admit I kinda like Benny in the show...I'm a sucker for accents...lol. (So yeah, guilty, kinda like Crowley too ;))
And then Amelia. Kudos for finding a better reason for her existence in Sam’s life ;) But let me tell you, that line: "saving animals and wallowing in wealth"...Wish that were true ;) As far as I know the only rich vet is the one who sold his practice and is now retiring...lol
| Junilia chapter 3 . 5/12/2013
You have no idea how much I appreciate this fanfiction. Or how much I wished it would have been like this in the series. I kinda got over it by now.. fortunately the season got better after a while. But I still can't believe how much they screwed the plot at the beginning of season 8. It's really brilliant how you fixed all that crap starting with Sam not looking for Dean right up to Dean's "brother relation" with that vampire. I'm still getting furious about some of the things that happened and were said between my favourite bros.
So, thank you : ) You have really good writing skills and I love the way you describe Sam and Dean's relationship in your stories. It's for good reason that you became my faourite author ; )
| AlElizabeth chapter 3 . 3/16/2013
Really good fic. I liked the re-vamping (pun intended) of what happened in the earlier parts of Season 8. I was a little disappointed with the tension between Sam and Dean in the show but couldn't stop watching, not after so long. I like this AU with the conspiracy between Crowley and Benny, it was really ingenious! Keep up the great work!
| ALostEcho98 chapter 3 . 2/14/2013
okay, i am literally swooning right now!
this was so amazing and soooo cute.
i just love the way you can just weave an amazing plot.
you are such a talented and gifted writer, there arn't a lot of them out there and it is pleasure reading your stories.
keep up the good work. :)
| Girl-of-Geekery chapter 3 . 2/12/2013
Okay, I know I usually review chapter by chapter, but I honestly got so wrapped up in this story, I just kept clicking the next button and didn't stop until I finished :P
This was AMAZING. Definitely one of my favorites of yours (and that's definitively saying something considering how much I love your stories).
All the action, and the plot reveals, and Sam kicking butt, and big brother Dean, and the brotherly moments just...I have no words to sum up how awesome this story is!
I loved how you had Dean realize how blind he had been about Sam lately and get back to being a big brother again.
This - "At least one Winchester had his head in the game and not up his ass these days." in particular was an awesome line.
And when Sam came in, ready to fight, I kinda figured he had heard something in 'Dean's' voice that sounded off, but I still couldn't help but go "AWWWW" when it was confirmed :P
| mdavidson0421 chapter 3 . 1/10/2013
This is brilliantly done and a pleasure to read. I especially enjoyed how you "fleshed out" the reason that Sam didn't look for Dean. Well done!
| goldenspringtime chapter 3 . 1/8/2013
I hope something like this happens it was awesome!
| caffrey girl chapter 3 . 1/7/2013
I agree with your AN completely that its high time the brothers patched up in canon. It's tiring to watch them at THIS much odds with each other. I sincerely hope they come up with a better explanation for Sam being MIA than hitting a dog.
Your story resolved all the qualms perfectly and gift wrapped it in much missed fluff Bren them so Thank You. The only other thing I want dem to do on tv is jerk bitch. J2 said in a panel that the boys have outgrown it but c'mon! It's too cool to never repeat!
| Mecha74 chapter 3 . 12/30/2012
Splendid, that was simply wonderful. A very interesting alternate and may I add BETTER take on the events of season 8.
Loved the camaraderie of the brothers at the end, harkens back to the early seasons when they really did seem to give a damn about each other, back before everything went to Hell...literally.
I'll be honest, I actually haven't read allot of Supernatural fics, but of those that I have read, yours is easily the best by far. If you choose to write another story that continues the events of this you have my personal guarantee that I will both read and review it.
Incidentally I look at your review number count and can't help but be jealous. LOL Hey I guy can dream right? XD
Anyways a superb job! :)
| Mecha74 chapter 2 . 12/30/2012
Holy crap it's Amelia! And may I add a far more logical reason for her existence in the story compared to what we got in the actual show, bravo. :)
And I loved these lines...
"Hey. Whatever helps you sleep at night..." Crowley responded dryly. "It's your soul, sweetheart, not mine. Oh, wait..." He paused and smiled. "It is mine."
"And we're all out of time. Thank you for playing Let's Make A Deal..."
Crowley's plan was indeed ingenious and in turn, your writing as well, seeing how this is your story after all. ;)
This just keeps getting better and better, I'm off to the last chapter now. :)
| Mecha74 chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
Really liked what you said in your author's note at the beginning, it was almost poetic.
Your description of Dean's inner turmoil at the realization that he had made a terrible mistake was masterfully done. Just as amazing once again was your handling of the characters, their dialogue, mannerisms, body language and more.
I wonder who the woman is, moving on to the next chapter now. An excellent first installment may I add. :)
| cappy712 chapter 3 . 12/12/2012
That was a great story. I'm glad that it was Dean who was the one to ended Benny and I liked the idea of a mark that was left behind.
enjoyed your take on Amelia being in a deal with Crowley and that the took the marker earlier because he didn't keep tabs on Sam enough. (kind of the shadow watching their place). Thank you for sharing.
| criminalxxxmindsxxxfreak chapter 3 . 12/6/2012
This was just awesome :D
Some part of me really, really wants this to happen on the show - and not entirely because Amelia dies, though that *may* just be a factor. Anyway, this was just amazing and would explain so much about what's going on this season and so many things that aren't making any sense right now. Brilliant!