Reviews for The Witch Twins Go Lima
Guest chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
I like your story!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
uuumm really nice but next?
romerogirl101 chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
I'm not trying to be rude but fix up your grammmer, spelling and freakin' EDIT! you have no idea how bad this looks. this could be a good story but you HAVE to edit! Don't take this as an offense but EDIT! For god sake EDIT!
davinelyfavored69 chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
is english your second language cause...damn you need a beta bad
FriesB4Guys chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
Not trying to be rude or anything but...This story kinda looks like it was written by a pre-schooler! It has potential but if you continue to write like this no one is going to read this story...Sorry...:/