Reviews for The Secret's in the Telling |
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![]() ![]() IT'S THE 6TH OF OCTOBER AND I AM REREADING THIS FIC FOR THE 100000000000 TIME! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your portrayal of the characters, and "parental-approved penis" is definitely one of the best phrases of all time! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok just cant read this any more it is UTTERLY blatantly insulting to Emma hses bad at all the stuff shes awesome at in the show (like running which has been mentioned many times he is very good at as she did it allot in her work as well as just in general) she spends all her time following regina around practically worshiping her while allowing her to treat her like crap and apologizing for the most slight things she does despite all the really mean stuff regina does to her and all the scared shitless cracks werent even funny the first time your emma is a little freaking scared girl about every freaking things and she gets played by everyone about every chapter, she apparently cant fight(apparenly henry is better with a sword -rolls eyes) despite being physically VERY able in the show...her only purpose seems to be someone for everyone to pick on and as a magic battery/stabilizer for the "awesome" regina all she is in this fic is the butt of every joke and and the worst sheriff in almost any fic Ive read on here, everyone gets away with everything over her, from slashed tires, hiding and watching a dwarf fight a cyclops and ruby prep a cannjon to kill ti while regina fires it and she "screams like a little Girls" seriously ...ugh...the emma in this fic is pathetic on so many levels and not even remotely as good as the one in the show at least the one in the show is talented, has a backbone and isnt scared of really anything heh cept losing the ones she loves, and she sure as hell is a damn good at being the sheriff and standing up and fighting and she wont let people walk all over her and shes not an idiot like the one in this fic heh the really idiotic thing being she even believes she herself is stupid in this fic she sure as hell calls herself it enough times and lets everyone else do it feh |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow. Damn. I'm not a Hook fan, but he is really getting a shitty deal right now. Poor guy. :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() The crystal thing kind of reminds me of the tv show Charmed. Great first chapter. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely enjoyed every minute of this epic adventure time well spent with Regina & her idiot... Thank you. |
![]() ![]() I know this story was published a long time Ago but... I stumbled across it and it was amazing! I so glad i got to read it! Thank you so much for this! |
![]() ![]() I spent literally ten hours reading this. I lack the words. BREATH TAKING. INCREDIBLE. THE BEST SWAN QUEEN I HAVE EVER READ. This was incredible, this is what stories can be, should be, should make people feel. THANK YOU. PLEASE KEEP WRITING. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm just about to start the epilogue. I had a sneaky suspicion that Argos might be Emma but, like, howwww? My brain is still frazzled, hopefully this chapter will iron out the confusion. You are a genius, seriously. IT IS JUST SO CLEVER! Too clever for me, obviously ;) I cannot wait to read more of your stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() When I started this I thought that somehow you were going to break my heart, and for a moment you almost did...but damn was this such an amazing story, I mean I'm in love! |
![]() ![]() ![]() shjshdjbjdhahjhs I LOVE THIS STORY. Seriously, it is just soooo funny. And heartwarming. My favourite Swan Queen fics are when Regina and Emma slowly realise their feelings for one another, reluctant as they may be to acknowledge that the 'hatred' is merely a façade. I'm giggling the whole way through it, especially the part told by Henry's POV. Very well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so much. I gave read more than three times now and I always notice something new that I missed on the last read. I hope you come back to continue on the sequel to this marvellous story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how Emma responds with yours when Regina calls her an idiot. Makes me grin like a fool every single time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my freakin' God! I started this story this morning and could not stop reading it! I'm pretty sure I've left a dent in my sofa where I didn't move all day. This has to be the most well put together story I have ever read in ANY fandom :-) As I read in another review, you could change up the character names and whatnot and make an awesome book out of this (kinda like 'Fifty Shades' but totally better). The size of this story and how you never veered off or got mixed up details is almost mind boggling. You truly are a gifted writer and I can't wait to read more of your works. I have never been as invested in a story as I was with this one. You balanced drama, mystery, romance, family,and humor so beautifully. It wasn't rushed, it was believable, and stayed true to the characters we know and love. I laughed, I cried, I thought, and I cried some more. Oh, and I hate Gold more than ever. The twists, the turns, the curves, the falling off a cliff drops...You brought it all together so beautifully (I cannot say that enough). Who knows, maybe after some rest I'll start reading again to see if I catch any clues I didn't the first time :-) Thank you for sharing such an awesome story with all of us. |
![]() ![]() The most mind boggling yet one of the most awesomely beautiful SwanQueen fic ever! |