Great story I thoroughly enjoyed. Awesome

So... i typically never actually review stories. Like ever. Just wanted you to know that i stumbled upon this at like 5:30 PM ... it's 3 AM the following morning and i've read this whole thing. it is INCREDIBLY rare to have me so worked up and heart pounding and on the edge of my seat on a fanfic.. but you have done it. Fabulous story. i literally couldn't stop reading. Thank you so much. this was so beautifully written and above all FANTASTICALLY thought out. i'm not gonna lie, when you pointed out that it was actually past emma at the store... i had to lean back in my chair and smile pretty hard. this story was amazing. thank you again.

Jfc this just ruined me. I've been kinda reluctant to start this because it's so long, and I kinda knew I'd basically end up putting my life on hold just to get trough it. And well...here we are. This was incredible and I loved it so much. You should pat yourself on the back for eternity for this one. Also, your writing is marvelous, big hug!

This was great? I enjoyed reading it!

F U and your f'ing amazing abilites to write such a sophisticated and in character novel and create feels and everything positive and clichey that draws people to reading fanfiction! but passion aside, you have amazing talent. don't ever give it up plz. keep writing cause you have a lot of impressed fans.

GODDAMN YOU I DIDNT ASK FOR THIS SHIT

ive been reading this for the past couple of days and i thought that it was pretty good. and then today i got to the last few chapters... i just finished a little while ago and i have been crying for probably over an hour.

all emotions aside, this fic was amazing. i loved that you had well written chapters and i liked that they were long too unlike mine. have you ever considered changing the names and stuff and making this into a real book? like im dead serious it was that good. you have good development, youre really good at that slow burn, the original characters werent shitty like they somtimes are, you didnt decharacterize any of the characters, and it was overall extremely well written. you should really pat yourself on the back for this. good job.

You absolute arsehole I'm crying like a baffoon this piece was beyond amazing, and definitely the best that I've read thus far. And you made me cry. I never cry. Gah. Seriously though, thank you! It was so perfect and so well thought out I'm so impressed. Yeah, it was just great

This is one of the most thought out story I have ever read. My mind is blown not only because of you outstanding talent in writing but the sheer awesomeness of this book!

I have not been able to read anything else since I started this fic! You are truly talented! :) Looking forward to the rest of this story and reading your others :) Thank you, Ashlynn

I LOVED IT! Please make a sequal

WHAT THE HELL KINDA TWIST THAT? YOUR MINDGENIUS

This was so incredible.

Holy. Shit. First of all this story was absolutely amazing, and I loved practically every minute of it, but dude...I just realized that certain elements of this story are actually kinda similar to the Legend of Zelda: A Link Between Worlds. It's weird. You've got the Hero/Savior, a different version of the hero in a mask who helps out the hero. Hero saves Princess/Queen from pure evil. The Link/Ravio and Emma/Argos comparison is especially cool to me :)

I gotta hand it to you, that was an original, LONG, incredible fic. I did lose some interest at times because it was just so much detail, and mostly when Argos was the focal point. But I loved it all the same and you kept me around for days reading all of it. Thanks for sharing!

This is an absolutely amazing story, and my favorite kind of romance. Thank you so much for writing this. You are an awesome author. Keep up the good work