Reviews for The Secret's in the Telling
firedancer34 chapter 7 . 12/30/2014
So I need to take a moment here as I have just started chewing through the OUAT fanfic section whilst on my semester break over the holidays and came across your story. I am about halfway through it looks like and I need to stop and gush over the pure awesomeness of this story so far.

First Where is that quote from at the beginning of chapter one? It's driving me nuts! Second, .FEELS. Love the banter and snark back and forth, but when Emma is trying to save Regina from the wraith, and the little moments between Henry and regina, and then Emma and Regina as the chapter's progress. So beautifully done.
The humor is also off the charts. The one-upmanships have been just...side-splitting. Seriously. The whole Regina shopping for her clothes had me cackling. But the whole story of the rocket launcher and flash-bangs? My roomie finally came in after like ten minutes of me laughing and asked what was so damn funny that I was now crying. Sadly she doesn't watch the show and could not appreciate and merely looked at me weird. Oh Well. Totally worth it.
I am also enjoying the character development and interactions. Especially between Emma and the deputies. Which is it's own comic relief.
And of course...finally the intrigue. I have a pretty strong suspicion of who our mystery person is, which of course leads to a whole slew of other questions. So I love that you have given some pretty strong hints to those who are paying close attention to the details as to their identity, but also that you are keeping a lot of other stuff still very much in the dark. I can't wait to finish this! Thank you again for an amazing story.
Emerald Demona chapter 14 . 12/29/2014
Awesomest story ever i was hooked i could noot stop reading. My roommate got annoyed when i teied to xook while reading.

Bad idea btw...
armored.heart chapter 14 . 12/24/2014
I finally got around to reading this whole thing... I LOVED it. Thank you so much for this amazing story.
Rei chapter 1 . 12/22/2014
Fuck. All of the tears. This is not just a great fanfic. This is a great STORY. This intricate fuckery of emotions and magic. Holy shit
llSardonyx chapter 14 . 12/19/2014
Read this last year, on this month... and cried like a baby... now I did it again and have no regrets! I think I'm making this a tradition :) haha
Thia is my favorite story. Thank you SO much for this.
Guest chapter 14 . 12/18/2014
It has been such a long time since I have read fanfiction that has disarmed me as much as your story. In such little words that don't convey the real essence of what I want to articulate. This is brilliant. The plotline was solid, the writing was fabulous, the depth and characterization was believable and, the banter, by golly the banter was phenomenal.
I read this in two days and, after the last sentence of this story, I had to sit still for a few solid minutes to just bask in awe that something of this caliber existed. You gave me goosebumps without even intending to and, for that, thank you. Be proud of what you've written. I wish you the best of luck and hope that you're well.
Hume chapter 14 . 12/8/2014
Ok. This is probably the best fanfic I've ever read. Congrats from Spain.
Skylar Datenshi chapter 14 . 12/2/2014
Yay! Happy ending!

I needed to steal about five other pairs of hands to do this but I give you twelve thumbs up!
Skylar Datenshi chapter 13 . 12/2/2014
O.o

Yay!
Skylar Datenshi chapter 12 . 12/2/2014
Why? Why would you do this to me? TT-TT
Dang it, now I'm teary.
Guest chapter 14 . 11/30/2014
It was wonderful thank you
Iuterpi chapter 14 . 11/28/2014
This a freakingly brilliant and well planned story. I looooved it so much. I had to read it twice and gosh, how perfect it was! Made me so emotional for a while, made be curious for the longest time. For a sec there I thought it would be Daniel, but the real ending was more perfect.

I'm really glad i got to read this.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2014
Omg I'm loving this story, its well done in terms of characters I'm loving the playfulness of Regina and henry I was cracking up, thank you!
Joylinda chapter 14 . 11/25/2014
This is a very well planned plot. Totally forgot about Willians Incantation.
I love the relationship between Emma and Regina, the constant bickering is so them.
This is definetly a fav story for me.
Great story
Joylinda chapter 12 . 11/25/2014
can I say that last scene with the pizza had me shed a tear. Im hear listening to attic from sleping at last and it just fit so well with this scene. When I first read this I yhought th opening scene was about Regina and then when Argos showed up I wa like no way thats Emma.
and now there is two chapters left but I cant bring myself to read it because I will cry if I have to read Emmas memoir
and what happens to regina is she just going to be alone with no Emma present after Christmas.
ahh man I need air
great story so far!
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