I find myself logging on to the fanfiction website just to read your work every now and then...an absolute delight to read, and I kid you not when I say I find this fic better than the actual show which, I feel, is sagging worse than an old hooker's tits :
and I must say, you have an incredible sense of humour that the show thoroughly lacks...to make people laugh is the hardest job and you, my friend, pull off comedy like it's nobody's business _

best of wishes :)

p.s. - jennifer morrison's emma has the personality of a rock and the emotional range of a car tire, you have brought life to the character...kudos :D

Love your writing. Once again, an entertaining chapter. Thank you!

I love this MORE than a fat kid loves cake. The writing and characterization are perf and the gloriously slow buildup is intriguing and satisfying :) this one is hooked

I meant Argo! I hate text, Auto correct

Whomever Afro is..he willing to give his life like the terminator did to save, Sara Connor! I think Argo will die but he will serve a grand purpose!

Very funny, great characterisation, sweet relationship buildup, mystery to make the brain tick. All round awesome read! And it's long /drool. (Mind out of the gutter! There was no pun there!)
Some serious talent there Pyro. Your writing is brilliant.

Argos and Emma. Mano y mano. Can't wait.
Your storytelling is precious as per usual. Keep going!

This is AWESOME

i like your story. i like the regina/ ema interaction.
weirdly i began to imagine argos as being a AU ema from the future maybe, what with the throwing of sword and some other stuff, but then argos is sure that ema love him, so i wondered if 'he' wasn't regina or henry.
it is probably nothing like that but it was a persistent idea with me while reading.

Since you put every clever or intense word, emotion or action into play...there's nothing left for me to say...im idiot stupid from amazement

I don't really have proper words for how much I adore this piece. I'll say this - I stayed up last night enjoying the hell out of it. It's hysterical, whimsical, off-beat and then suddenly, wonderfully dramatic and scorchingly poignant. This is a true masterpiece.

oh by the way. its 01:33 at night right now XD and I was going to bed for like hours ago but couldnt let go of this story just for your information. the story is really THAT good!;)

:O I loooove this story! jesus! you can really make Regina and Emma as the way they are in the tv-show. not the "jump into the loving-already". great. I love the way its slow for both of them. really awesome! I could read this for ever:D

Oh...wow. This was so incredible. First of all, I've never laughed out loud at a story so much in my LIFE. And the action sequences are freaking heart-pounding...that wraith attack was by far the most exciting and agonizing and intense things I've read in a very long time. And I read a LOT! Your characterizations are remarkable...it makes it SO easy for me to play it all out in my head as if I were watching the show. What a delight to find a gem like this! The chemistry you're building between Emma and Regina is positively scorching and yet it's been a slow burn, which I can apppreciate. As much as I'd love for them to just shut up and kiss sometimes, I can appreciate that neither of these women would have come to that point easily and without a fair amount of stubborn denial. So amazing job! The only thing more perfect would be for me to have found this after it was already completed, but you're even perfect in THAT regard since you appear to update frequently and with these deliciously long chapters. You are an angel.

Brilliant update :)