Reviews for Sparks Will Fly
Bronze chapter 1 . 5/24
Seeing as this still has only one chapter I guess nobody liked it. I, however, find it interesting. I'm not surprised by the pilot recognizing Dumbledore. It is part of HP canon that Albus fought in WWII so it's entirely possible that they know each other. Though I have to pity the man. Once he gets out into the real world he's gonna very likely go into shock at all the progress since his time. And regardless of what the moronic wizards and witches think, they're living in a fantasy world of their own making. I really would like to see this filled out to multiple chapters. I think it has promise as I've never seen nor read any others like it.
SortingHat chapter 1 . 8/19/2015
So why did you write this only to abandon it? If it was your way to gain a little bit of attention well buddy you are getting it! The negative kind of attention you asshole!

Those who work to gain attention and fame deserve neither!
Cateagle chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
Hmm, definitely an interesting start and I have to wonder if gravity pulled him through muggle-repelling wards or if there's another reason. Too, I have to wonder just what his connection is with Albus. It's definitely a good and attention-grabbing start. The by-play among the pilots comes off as realistic, too, based on the histories I've read of other fighter squadrons.
Duplexaxis chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
I absolutely loved this! Brilliant idea please continue writing it...
happylady chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
I like how it starts
So please continue
Until next time
Gloria
Feather and Green Ink chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
This is great so far and I am very interested to see how it develops! Please continue! Thanks
mad carder chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
temporal portal then crash at hogwarts ...
could make this into a longer story, works well as a one shot
kewr69 chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
good story
catsim1953 chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
Very interesting beginning. I'm wondering just what that cloud was to propel a WW2 pilot to Harry's time.

Waiting for the next thrilling instalment...

Cathy
Penny is wise chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
Awesome first chapter.
crvenashkorpija chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
Nice...i like it...as usually...
starboy454 chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
look ike it could be good
Twoweektwomove chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
Ooooh time travel? I like this story so far. Keep writing! I'm curious as to finding out about Ignatius Prewitt (though I have my excitable suspicions).
dennisud chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
Having a Peverell as a last name gave that one away! Still a reverse time story is not one seen much. Lets see where this goes!

dennisud
apAidan chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
a very interesting start, though one comment is that if they had only been flying for 10 minutes, they were hauling ass to get to those coordinates from tangmere

also curious that there's a storm on the day of the massive Luftwaffe raid on Coventry.

this looks as if it should be enjoyable,

apaidan
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