|Reviews for Heian Conglin|
| Meech Macko chapter 25 . 3/8
It would have been more regal on Ranma IF he used a SWORD...making him more graceful plus it has more reach and fists take too much effort.
He gets a scepter...? of all things.
I was hoping he would get a Katana and Xian pu get a chinese Jian...they are hardcore martial artists so they can be graceful with swords.
Swords require less effort than fists which you'll need to get too close...even a reinforced gloves would have been better.
| gort420 chapter 33 . 3/4
great to see you back. please give akane an honest chance.
| fellow chapter 33 . 3/2
| sandcrawlr chapter 33 . 3/3
Great to see an update. Keep up the writing!
I bet a dollar that Cologne notices Shampoo is pregnant.
| Hiryo chapter 33 . 3/3
thank you for this very good chapter!
as well a well done explanation and cut from both akane and shampoo!
| shugokage chapter 33 . 3/2
Great job on this chapter and this interesting point by Ranma!
| OMAC001 chapter 33 . 3/2
Looks like we're getting close to the end! WHat is Perfume's deal?! What does she get out of THis? What is the source of the game's power? Please update soon so I can find out!
| Malix2 chapter 33 . 3/2
Good to see a new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
| VFSNAKE chapter 33 . 3/2
Wow! Ramna made things abundantly clear to Akane on where things stand with them. Gendo, Soun, and the rest of the Tendo household won't like this. LOL! Nuts to them I say.
| Tellemicus Sundance chapter 33 . 3/2
A lot of talking that'll be forgotten in the end, but it was still a fun chapter! I loved seeing Kahn again, he's definitely one of my more favorite characters in the story. Actually, it'd be kinda cool if he could somehow 'survive the ending', a little souvenir if you will.
And once again, Akane shuts down her brain and goes charging off into the unknown on sheer impulse. It's wonder she maaged to survive this long in the jungle despite the others' presences.
I suppose the next one'll feature a similar heart to heart between Shampoo and Mousse eh? Man, I love this story! :)
| Riniko22 chapter 33 . 3/2
Well Akane has grown but that is not enough, and too late as is. The running off into the forest was not a smart move on her part, but emotions have always been high with her. The only way that she would be able to remember any of this would be to enter into the game, but it may be impossible to start another player after it has already been played a bit.
| sandcrawlr chapter 32 . 12/25/2013
Great chapter. Merry Christmas. Keep up the writing!
| gump1098 chapter 32 . 12/20/2013
Your fanfic is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you're gonna get.
| shugokage chapter 32 . 12/17/2013
Great job on this chapter!
| Tellemicus Sundance chapter 32 . 12/15/2013
You know, this could potentially lead to something that's been bugging me about this story for a while. All that Shampoo and Ranma know of the game once they beat it is that everything will 'go back'. But they don't really know what that means, do they? Well, here's a potential chance to blast them with true indecision, fear, regret, and anger.
Kill one(some) of the main cast characters! Someone(s) like Akane, Cologne, Happosai, Ryoga, someone(s) who they are quite well acquainted with and will be distressed over that person's death, regardless of who they are and what their present relationships are. Torment Ranma and Shampoo emotionally, mentally, and spiritually by killing someone important to them that they've seen quite regularly in their recent lives.
Other than that, awesome chapter! I greatly enjoyed seeing further development of Ranma's character and his emerging sense of honor. Plus it's great to see them working as a true team and experimenting with new martial arts techniques despite their present problems. And if what I'm remembering is right about his story, then around the time that the cannibals arrived is when Happosai finally threw in the towel when he played it. That means that they are now probably pretty close to or already are now venturing into unchartered territories.
Oh, and for the sake of poor saps who never knew for sure, could you possibly clarify just how much more of the game is left for them to face off against? We've seen, what, about twenty or so different turns thus far right? How much longer is the game supposed to go on for?
Can scarcely wait to see the next chapter and how the group of 'misfits' will handle a tribe of cannibals without Ranma and Shampoo to distract them. Please update again REAL soon! Okay?