I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!

I love seeing Ash with all kinds of pokemon that he never caught before, it's great! Also i love seeing him as a poke-dad, him raising pokemon from eggs and even breeding them is very helpful for his journey to become a well known trainer. I hope that we see Ash using Mega Evolution in future chapters too, that would be awsome!

I hope that Ash will catch some of the pokemon he befriends on his journey, like the Houndour pack, Mewtwo, Lugia, Venipede, Latias, Latios, Darkrai, Larvitar, Meloetta, Archeops, Hatenna, Zacian, Skrelp, Luxio, Spearow, Rattata, Zorua, Suicune, he met a group of Sneasel and Weavile nearing the Frontier Brains adventures and i think he sould have caught a Sneasel and evolved it into Weavile, Ash met a shiny Phantump and didn't catch it, Ash met a Spoink in Hoenn, a Hippopotas in Sinnoh, Ash should have catch a Scyther and evolved it into Scizor cause both pokemon are powerful and fast which is Ash battle style in the show, plus in journeys, Ash met lots of pokemon and one pokemon i'd love for him to catch is Nickit and evolves him into Thievul cause of it's power and speed, plus if team rocket catch Yapper and evolve it into Boltund then whenever Team Rocket is near by then Thievul will tell Ash cause Thievul and Boltund are enemies so Jessie, James and Meowth have to find a way to do their mutto before Boltund appears to bark at Thievul. These are some of the pokemon Ash meets and befriends that i can think/remember him meeting, so i hope that you can put them into your story.

Also i love that Tomo is on Ash's pokemon adventure as his little brother, that is just so sweet to see Ash helping Tomo in the city and letting Tomo have some poke-balls to catch his own pokemon. Their brother moments are my favorite moments in the story so far. Also i can't help but wonder you is going to be Ash's lover in this story, cause i am very glad you didn't use Misty for his lover, cause like in your story, i STRONGLY believe that Misty is and should be only his friend/sister figure and also cause her personality doesn't work well with Ash's personality. So i hope it's Anabel from the Frontier Brains, she be perfect absolutely PERFECT for him!

I hope to see more and more of this story as we travel with Ash all over the world as he continues his pokemon adventures and i can't help but wonder if Tomo will be with Ash on all of his adventures or some of them. Cause i LOVED the moments where Ash sings, i'm a socker for musicals, so my number one favorite moments are Ash singing.

PLEASE UPDATE VERY SOON and i hope that Ash will capture Mewtwo, Mew, and the Clone Pokemon, so they can grow up strong and healthy at Pro Oak's lab. Seeing Ash and Mewtwo will be great and i just can't wait!

I love this story, but do you have any plans to continue?

will this continue

I just read this from the start to now in one sitting an can’t wait to see what is next keep up the great writing an stay blessed

Oh this ash is pretty stupid. he's acting like some stupid street thug all the time. this was bearable in the beginning but it's just getting worse and worse.

fucking hell. what's with all the pokemon fanfics forcing tomo to go with ash. it's annoying and stupid.

I'm all for ash getting more pokemon but he's gonna have too many soon and not be able to train them all.

imagine if ash's mom trains up all the pokemon he gives her and enters the pokemon league secretly and beats ash in the finals.

Ash is gonna end up with the entire Kanto Pokedex minus Pikachu.

if he catches too many Pokemon he's not gonna be able to train all of them enough...

lots of simple spelling errors in this.

the Ponytail is kinda dumb

damn I was hoping it was something more interesting than a Magikarp and Spearow. but I shouldn't have expected anything else

That's just not fair you stopped right before mewtwo

Too bad didn't get Ash vs Giovanni