Reviews for Forever Different
annaescadereo 13 chapter 1 . 4/6
OH MY GOD
Guest chapter 5 . 3/6
Please update soon!
gummy b3ars chapter 5 . 11/18/2015
Update pls
TheEternallyElite chapter 5 . 11/16/2015
Smash his face in Hyuuga!
Garcia Grace chapter 5 . 8/10/2015
Next Chapter Please~
Lukalukageno chapter 5 . 2/18/2015
Please please continue!
Pinkcomet999 chapter 1 . 1/29/2015
I love this story
prexzkie chapter 5 . 1/1/2015
I really love your story author!... Make a new chapter plz..
Storytelling-Doll chapter 5 . 11/9/2014
cant wait for the next chapter!
MeetMeOnTheDarkside chapter 5 . 11/2/2014
I feel bad for Charasauke though XD
Saki-Hime chapter 5 . 11/1/2014
Funny, very nice.
uchihaaxhyuugaa chapter 5 . 10/14/2014
OH MY PLEASE UPDATE I LOVE THIS STORY TO BITS AND PIECES
Guest chapter 5 . 10/5/2014
As much as I want to just celebrate that you've updated (yay!), I think you need to work some more on this chapter. It didn't reach the comedic heights of your previous chapters and felt a bit out of touch with the writing style you used before. There were also plenty of mistakes, like forgetting words, lack of proper punctuation etc.
I'd also advice you not to use so many short sentences - the text comes off as choppy and gives the impression that you can't use conjunctions (which you obviously can, judging by your other chapters).

Remember not to rush - I'd rather wait another three years (ok, that might be pushing it ;) ) for a good update, than a sloppy one.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
Naruto and Hinata is going to be canon so swallow that one you Sausage/Hinata whackjobs.
MeetMeOnTheDarkside chapter 4 . 9/28/2014
DAWWW
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