Reviews for Precious Treasure
StormyMonday chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
Well, this took me a while to read because I'm not generally a fan of stories with word counts over 5k. Also, I was never terribly interested in the band members (aside from Yui) simply because of the lack of character development. However, minus the opinion that I think you could do a bit of minor restructuring in places, I liked this very much. I can totally see Iwasawa being Yui's mentor, and I'm also really glad you didn't portray Yui as a total airhead.

Oh, and referencing Louie Louie and the fact that the lyrics are nearly incomprehensible was too funny! I'm pretty sure that even native English speakers have no idea what the lyrics are beyond the chorus. :D
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