|Reviews for Cutting out a new life|
| PureHearts chapter 8 . 8/26/2013
I actually liked this at first, and everything up to chapter 7 was quite good. But then, it just went a bit...
I think it was because after chapter 6, you started bringing the really heavy stuff, and for your characters, harry and snape, you attempted to create depth for them, but it just fell short. I think you have a very good idea, but you need polishing. if you get yourself a good beta, this story could be a lot better. The concept and idea behind the story is good, but characters, and just language use, and how you express certain scenes could use some improvement. Overall, I think it was a bit of a let down, but it wasn't bad per se. It has the potential to be a really good story so yeah. Good attempt though. Keep writing and you'll definitely improve.
| Venus914 chapter 23 . 8/24/2013
I used to like Dramione...because she's the inly girl and i have to relate to her...because, well, im a girl. But i cant seem to. I just read because there were no other choice and i already hated Ginny. When i discovered slash, im happy that i can finally stop reading Hermione-centered fics. I can relate more with Harry and he's perfect with almost all malw pairings. l can finally give in to my hatred of her. With Draco, i've always liked him. Have you neet someone in high school who turned your stomach inside out because they smell or they were filthy or they were disgusting? That's how i've always felt about Hermione. I dont think she deserves Draco but this is your story.
| magicanimegurl chapter 31 . 6/26/2013
Beautiful! I love it! Full of hope, love, healing, and life...
| Daddys little crazy bitch chapter 31 . 2/3/2013
| emthereble chapter 31 . 1/23/2013
WOW, its bloodly BRILLANT !
| Lovable Riolu chapter 8 . 11/22/2012
No offense, but you use blimey waaaaaay too much :D But I like the story
| Jamie Theobald chapter 31 . 11/16/2012
Awww that was a sweet ending! I love the fact that even though they were early all three kids were born on the same day! I also loved the names!
| Jamie Theobald chapter 30 . 11/16/2012
There's only one chapter left... Will we get to see the birth of the babies?
| Jamie Theobald chapter 29 . 11/16/2012
So fraternal twins... At least they will have mix... Great chapter
| Jamie Theobald chapter 28 . 11/16/2012
| Jamie Theobald chapter 27 . 11/16/2012
awww so full of love. I agree that age difference doesn't matter as long as you love the person... My husband and i have a sixteen year difference and we love each other deeply! Great chapter!
| Jamie Theobald chapter 26 . 11/16/2012
Okay, I was close. Instead of both having twins, one single and one set of twins... So will they be identical twins or will they be fraternal? Boys, girls, boys and girls?
| Jamie Theobald chapter 25 . 11/16/2012
So Neville figured it out... Huh, I wonder how the rest of the school will take it when they figure it out...
| Jamie Theobald chapter 24 . 11/16/2012
WOw can you imagine if both of them had twins? Just starting and having four kids?
| Jamie Theobald chapter 23 . 11/16/2012
Wow they are both pregnant; didn't see that coming! Stupendous job on the story!