|Reviews for Atlas|
| ryabusha chapter 17 . 11h ago
So yeah, nigga update, you're killing me here ; n ;
Great chapter btw
| Lord Herobrine chapter 1 . 3/8
This fanfiction has been recommended on under Alt fic and Crack Fic.
| gentlemankitsune chapter 1 . 3/7
I think I just found another muse
| Rahvin'sCage chapter 10 . 3/5
Just the fact that you referenced The Wheel of Time makes me love you.
| apimpnamedKyuubi chapter 17 . 3/6
Great chapter with developments steering along swimmingly, but in regards to the bonus chapter I had an idea I wanted to share. This mostly came about cause I was browsing youtube and came upon a Team 7 I'll make a man out of you video. The idea is in perhaps one of the spars Naruto might engage the Han you make it into a montage from Mulan's 'I'll make a man out of you' to prepare for their fight with the Han. They'll lose cause the Han's the Han but it still would be a cool moment
| RahvinsCage chapter 2 . 3/4
You just LOVE platypuses, don't you? XD I can't blame you, they're badass. But in all seriousness, I really like the story so far (almost said love, but it's too soon into this relationship). I've noticed a few errors in stuff like grammar, but that's just me being a perfectionist. Besides, I only just finished chapter two, so I'm sure they get much less frequent. Keep up the good work :D Looking forward to catching up with you in this.
| Abdullahsaurus chapter 17 . 3/3
Nice i can't wait for the next chap, honestly i like this story better then Echoes.
| Jonuts chapter 14 . 3/2
BWAHAHAHA! Danzo, you magnificent bastard!
| Jonuts chapter 11 . 3/2
I've got to admit, The Han's dialogue is in that sweet spot of being so over the top it's awesome.
| Antonio92 chapter 17 . 3/2
Just finished reading this, loved the story, the idea is incredibly awesome and I'm a sucker for non-canon Narutoes _ Also I agree that the Snake Summons get the short end of the stick a lot of the time, so it's nice to see them used in a story as serious good characters (I would count Daybreak, but it's been discontinued before the Snakes could really do much other than slither into Sasuke's pants T_T Oh, and train him to be a Sage I guess)
Keep it up, I'm following this story eagerly!
| CMVreud chapter 17 . 3/2
One fucked up dream that is.
And the Omake... KONOHA PIE!
| Hibiki54 chapter 17 . 3/2
Excellent plot and write. This could easily be a nice write for a Naruto Alternate Timeline.
| Luc1v3r chapter 17 . 3/2
I loved your quota in the last chap : the world will remembered why jinchuriki it's to be feared.
I just hope you can find a way to make naruto stealhty on plain side so he can assassinate his target withou unnoticed, no chakra based tecnique of course
it's good you coming back pal
| Jonuts chapter 7 . 3/2
Bah. And I had my money on Atlasbeing a play on Charles Atlas Superpowers, which basically means a certified badass *without* superpowers in a setting where having superpowers is the norm. I'm saddened to see such a tenuous namesake instead of such a more relevant one considering the base of the story.
Also, a shared grandfather doesn't make you "distant" cousins. It's the closest cousin you can be. Any closer, and they'd be siblings.
| kishinokurobi chapter 17 . 3/1
As always, I love your writing. Keep up the great work.
I would leave a longer review, but I've been putting it off because I'm getting up to date in Echoes and will leave a good one when I am.