Reviews for Atlas
darklightening chapter 20 . 1/17
I'm happy that Fuu and Naruto are getting together. I really enjoy reading your story. It's definitely an original and unique spin to the anime itself, very believable as well. Thanks for sharing!
Vilkath chapter 7 . 12/23/2015
Yeah Kakashi's teaching methods were always a hot topic amongst the fans. Kakashi was kind of a useless prick to begin with and only really became 'cool' in later arcs of the series. That said he was a horrible teacher not just for what he didn't teach his students but what he did teach.

Not teaching his team anything useful was one thing but then he pushed them into a dangerous mission like Wave after he knew missing ninja were around. Then he nominated them for the Chunin exams after that brush with death and no real increase in training. But to me the worst offense was after the final rounds came about in canon and he only taught Sasuke anything. In under a month he transformed Sasuke from an academy level nobody to some one capable of using the Chidori like 2-3 times a day plus gave him the speed and strength of a taijutsu specialist like Lee.

Sure he didn't quite have the endurance of Lee but dang that was on heck of an upgrade. He never was really responsible for ever teaching his team again either. Every other thing that made Team 7 improved came from other people.
Vilkath chapter 3 . 12/23/2015
Good times and yeah I always thought the cursed seal was a pretty awesome hack power, a lot like the more popular bloodlines of the series. It's not how much a the cursed seal can do, it's how every time there is a problem some new found upgrade or hidden power is released to rebalance the scales.

I mean in the end Sasuke could pretty much call upon the highest level of the seal with no draw backs after he killed Orchimaru and go toe to toe in power with a Kyuubi-fied Naruto. All the while the Kyuubi chakra was killing Naruto and nothing bad happened to Sasuke...

You would be crazy to not and try to improve that kind of performance enhancer. Even if you kept the 1 in ten death bit all you'd really have to do is introduce it to a large group of people and train up the survivors. The way Orchimaru did things was kind of stupid. He looked for strong ninja first and then used the seal on them hoping they would survive. Be a lot easier to deal with people who lived first and just train them up to be good. I mean the important people of the series went from academy students to top of the line ninja in just a few months/years of training.
qwerty chapter 17 . 12/6/2015
I read "Salutations", and Charlotte's Web suddenly popped into my head.
qwerty chapter 14 . 12/6/2015
How much red is needed?
LincolnJohnson chapter 5 . 12/1/2015
Nice job on this chapter. Also, I like how Fuu and Han's personalities were depicted.
LincolnJohnson chapter 4 . 12/1/2015
Wonderful job. Keep it up.
LincolnJohnson chapter 3 . 12/1/2015
I'm enjoying this story very much.
LincolnJohnson chapter 2 . 12/1/2015
Excellent chapter. I'm really looking forward to what you come up with next.
LincolnJohnson chapter 1 . 11/30/2015
This story's start is unbelievably amazing. I can't wait to read more.
KnowPein chapter 20 . 11/28/2015
Update soon
KnowPein chapter 16 . 11/28/2015
Finally sauce is Dead...

I was wondering why was he left alive in this story...
KnowPein chapter 7 . 11/27/2015
so good...

'THE HAN' and his eccentricities...
KnowPein chapter 4 . 11/27/2015
well Danzo As Anbu commander really like it...

Canon emphasized on his negatives too much

A commander who puts village before everything...
KnowPein chapter 3 . 11/27/2015
Loving the story so far...

you are so cool

tobi kidnapping Naruto was awesome...

like you mentioned I never understood that plot hole if he could travel anywhere he could just kidnap him...
put genjutsu game...
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