Le mieux!

"You're notoriously bad at deadlines" you say... Heh, you were being prophetic in a sense.

You have not finished the story, nonetheless you have concluded it more or less. There is just the aftermath that would come next so in essence you have satisfied your readers. Once again, good job!

First of all I'll say that this is not simply a good story. It is a phenomenal story. Well done.

I like the approach you have referenced in one of your ANs - the fact that certain overpowered abilities were not used in canon so that the plot would unravel in a certain way. Because if they were used properly the whole story would have ended much much sooner.

However, mind-control seals? I think that you should have drown the line here. It is way too overpowered. Basically a kotoamatsukami without cooldown. The existense of such a thing suspends the disbelief for me since if used properly, just like what we said above, there would be no story at all - its user would simply win.

Aside from that, as mentioned: this is one of the best stories I have read recently.

Yeah... Next chapter is taking a lil bit lmaoo. But what a story, this was an incredible rush reading this. Amazingly written, unique, and an absolute masterpiece. Wish I could see the very ending, but at least I got to read the last battle. What a great story.

The Han deserves more recognition

Sticking your fingers in a little girl's ass is kinda sus, but it's even weirder when the little girl wants to stick her fingers up your ass too.

FUCK YEAHHHHH! I don't know if this story ai gonna be good, but goddddddaaaammnnnnn it boyaa, that summary, that image coverrrrr and that titleeeeee! LE'S GOOOOOO!

ahahah lelouch lamperouge

Se que probablemente no escribes más historias, solo quería decirte que tú trabajo es de admirar me brindaste muchas horas de entretenimiento con tus relatos, espero que lo leas y sepas que tienes un fan esperando que algún día decidas actualizar

this is awesome. not just because naruto is disabled from his peers, you also changed the villains MO to them becoming war mongers instead of like evil masterminds accumulating wealth to defeat all of the villages in one fell swoop. with naruto unable to use any techniques, he must use every tech he can get his hands on.

Of all the fanfiction I've read, this scene always stood out to me I like that Naruto of this story isn't a power house but a calculating ninja 10/10

Get that platypus a fedora.

Hot damn that was good.

Nice

Great story, can't wait for more