Reviews for Atlas
vernonlim2004 chapter 20 . 12/22/2017
This story was one of the best ones I have ever read. Please continue it if you can.
Guest chapter 6 . 12/8/2017
Sasori the snorter
Karl Fendrik Davidsen chapter 7 . 12/8/2017
Sasori the snorter dude
Guest chapter 2 . 9/20/2017
I find it ironic and a bit hypocritical that Naruto thinks of ninjas as ones that don't fight fair yet he criticizes the Uchiha as thieves instead of thinking of the Sharingan and its abilities(copying included) as tools that they as ninjas should and do utilize. It's fine if he only comments on the wielder's attitude on their approach on using their doujutsu, but to comment negatively on them actually using their abilities/bloodline limits is another thing. It's like asking a NINJA to not use one of their trumpcards. Sorry for the rant, but I'm tired of always reading people's comments on the Uchihas as thieves when 'thieves' comes with the job description.
AureliusBlack chapter 20 . 8/26/2017
My God what a story. I read this entire thing in two days and it was more entertaining than i ever thought it would be. Your characters are real and have their own distinct personalities, the ninjas actually act like ninjas, and it flowed perfectly. This is an incredibly well built and well told story. Good work
thepkrmgc chapter 8 . 8/19/2017
if you cant be a mage, best train for anti-magic
thepkrmgc chapter 7 . 8/18/2017
wars arent level scaled, this isnt an RPG, sometime you come across a foe you cant beat, and sometimes people die
thepkrmgc chapter 6 . 8/18/2017
it would have been cool to see naruto roam with Han and Fuu, but if this battle makes the threat level clear they might decide to stick around
thepkrmgc chapter 5 . 8/18/2017
I wondering how this gathering of tailed beasts will play out?
thepkrmgc chapter 4 . 8/18/2017
when in doubt, use more dynamite
thepkrmgc chapter 3 . 8/18/2017
paranoia is learned, and i suspect that naruto will be much moreso after this
thepkrmgc chapter 2 . 8/18/2017
its fitting that an inteligent naruto has to face smarter villains, it wouldnt due for the tech to only be on one side
thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 8/18/2017
for all the storys that power up the canon hero, its always really cool to see one that handicaps them and forces the character to adapt, ninjas without magic are cooler
Guest chapter 19 . 7/16/2017
Didn't Pokemon base Gyarados off that koi legend?
Guest chapter 7 . 7/15/2017
Damn they killed poor Sakura and Sai. Good story despite the fact or maybe especially as it shows important characters still don't have plot armor in this. Good job.
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