|Reviews for The Late Excuse|
| lunynha chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
a little confused
but i like ...
look i think you should add a chap 2 but putting lovi more stronger
maybe with another person[in the end it can be spamano..but it would be unfair to lovi be with antonio after he being a shit head with him]
and i love jealousy!spain
also ...why spain would want pull a prank on lovi?
and lovi were very ooc ,also if you put chappy 2 dont make lovi like a perpetual tsunadare [he isnt like that]
and thank god tonio wasnt after feli [PLEASE DONT USE THIS ...it make the fic looks a fucking cliche]