Reviews for The Late Excuse
lunynha chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
a little confused

but i like ...

look i think you should add a chap 2 but putting lovi more stronger

maybe with another person[in the end it can be spamano..but it would be unfair to lovi be with antonio after he being a shit head with him]

and i love jealousy!spain

also ...why spain would want pull a prank on lovi?

and lovi were very ooc ,also if you put chappy 2 dont make lovi like a perpetual tsunadare [he isnt like that]

and thank god tonio wasnt after feli [PLEASE DONT USE THIS ...it make the fic looks a fucking cliche]