|Reviews for Pokemon Blues|
| Smiley-Nami chapter 2 . 2/24/2015
This is good. Continue when you can.
| WwWwW chapter 2 . 11/13/2012
Well, I guess it is alright with this story. Specially needed to crack up when I read that conan was bored because no one had died xD. so casically the canon Conan I know, always appears there where tsomeone dies but doesn't find the fact thwen no one dies boring, like in the movie, he is just interested infinding out the truthso yeah xD
But basically overall it really needs more help with the story, there is ash running without hello or whatever and there is no real story telling, no description, not much emotion, not much knowing of what is oing on and where and it really doesn't get the fun reading it compared to descriptive language. The idea is good but you may want to add a a lot more emotion and descriptive writing is your story, and the most importnat factor would be details which are also needed to like the story.