Reviews for That Cruelty Which Yet is Love
blueforu chapter 1 . 9/23/2014
Love it but is she dead?
MagicMirrorSeesAll91 chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
Ok so Question:

Did she kill her in the end or just "Vampirise" her?

Great story btw :D
fanfictor40 chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
Love it
CdB55 chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
Wow..I've heard of this book; now you have me interested in comparing its prose to yours.
Thank you for sharing this.
Lanaholic chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
Ok, I do get the point, it's not bad at all, just way to fast. Destiny, fate,... still, it went to fast.
But I liked it anyway! Yeah I did!
ScOut4It chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
I really am enjoying your gothic tale.
Whether yours or the original author's, I like the references to Regina living in Emma and Emma dying in her.
The sex scene was amusing with the older wording.
Thanks for writing!
EvilRegalCyanide chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
Camilla has always been one of my favorite stories! Blending it with SwanQueen was total brilliance! Loved it!;)
Ryoshu chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
Well done. Loved the story dialogue and the older style of language. This was a delightful piece to read. Thanks for sharing.
xAngeloftheNorthx chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
Ooohhhh... Wow!
I have actually read Carmilla and I love it but I love this one more :)
Regina is so freaking sexy.. *sigh* ;-)
Xxxxxxx
B of Ericaland chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
Oh my, all that is dear and holy, I don't even know what to say to this! I feel like someone who just had amazing sex and then woke up to find it was destined to be a one night stand, both completely satisfied and utterly disappointed that it won't be happening again. Inappropriate metaphor, I know, but it's exactly how I'm feeling. This was amazing, I shall favourite it, which I never do lightly.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
owch horrible.
Mar chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
Whoa I absolutely adore the fact that Regina is a vampire and she is so hot with Emma and omg the final part does it mean Emma is a vampire update soon;-)
karjens44 chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
Loved this. Very old school writing style which fits the mood of this very hot story. I will say I agree with one of the reviewers in that the end came a little too fast as far as Emma agreeing to "die" for love that she just met. Unless this was indeed a dream or a premonition? Would love to see more of what leads to this moment... how each has been drawn to one another for years. But aside from that...truly splendid and passionate as all your stories are
QwithoutA chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
Okay truthful response; I'm not quite sure what to think about this one. The idea of Vamp Regina is enough to leave me salivating but the enjoyment wasn't there for me. I'm not a huge fan of the old english style so that's a point against me but I have seen it done well and have enjoyed it through that.

I think the trouble here was its brevity - I didn't see/feel the interaction between the characters that would lead me to believe Emma would give up her life "for love" just from what was written here - a very fast interaction. If there was supposed to be some sort of connection there, it didn't come through - not in that exceedingly short account of Regina's vision/dream and then the jump into sex (in which I felt like the seduction was missing).

If i missed the whole point then forgive me. I do admire the undertaking but for me I need to see more connection/reason/feeling. Thank you for sharing - don't take this review negatively, it' just one person's thoughts on this single piece. Keep sharing your writing because every piece is a gift to us who read :)
Fivealpha chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
I absolutely love it!
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