|Reviews for On Mobius|
| lilysash97 chapter 11 . 1/23
Blaze isn't gonna get dressed?
| lilysash97 chapter 9 . 1/23
What the *bleepity*?!
| HTKWolfe777 chapter 19 . 2/10/2013
Spike: "Hey, where the heck did Sadow skate off to?"
Cocoa: "That was so sweet I think I'm getting cavities!" She hugs Reave who blushes slightly under his black feline fur.
Spike: Pulls one of Cocoa's wings, "Are you guys listening? Shadow's gone!"
The chocolate colored bat whines in pain, and Reave punches the Ash-Grey hedgehog.
Reave: "He left to go prepare our next adveture wih HTKWolfe, plus I beleive this story was a bit much for him to handle."
Cocoa: Wipes away a tear, "Why do you say that?"
Reave: "Because this story ends with him getting a happy ending, something that he is solely convinced will never happen to him. Maria, Molly, and that Chris kid came close a few times to dying himself."
Spike: rubs his sore cheek, "What, he thinks anyone he gets close to dies?"
Reave: "It's possible that he beleives it on some level."
Cocoa: "Poor guy..."
Reave: Grins, "I wouldn't be too worried about him, nothing lasts forever after all. With authors like this WhyteRabyt making good, believable stories bout him, I think he's begining to hope."
Cocoa: Gasp, "You're right!" Turns to Whyte, and waves franticly, "Thank you! We promise to do or best to help Shadow!"
| HTKWolfe777 chapter 13 . 2/10/2013
Reave: "I beleive that was the numer of the forbidden hotel room in The Shining."
Spike: "The what now?"
Reave: "It's an old horror movie. The band Thirty Seconds to Mars based the music video for their song The Kill off of it."
Spike: "Oh, now I remember! That song is so boss!"
| HTKWolfe777 chapter 12 . 2/10/2013
Spike: Scratches his head, "Okaaay, I don't see why Shadow would flip over a little purring. Hedgehogs pur!"
Shadow: "Well THIS hedgehod hasn't purred in fifty years."
Cocoa: "That was so adorable, I think I'm feling a bit woozy!"
Reave: "The plot thickens, I'm impressed."
| HTKWolfe777 chapter 7 . 2/9/2013
Shadow: "TELL me that you're JOKING!"
| HTKWolfe777 chapter 5 . 2/9/2013
Spike: " Well, all things considered, that went pretty well."
The others look at Spike, each wearing their own look of surprise.
Shadow: "You actully said something that wasn't absurdly idiotic."
| HTKWolfe777 chapter 2 . 2/9/2013
Spike is eyeing Shadow warrily, and looks to Reave for support.
Reave: "Any thoughts, Shadow?"
Shadow:: "... Yes, I would have critiqued her that a true warrior should always stay on gaurd, but... melting crayons? To make something look like blood? If I wanted to see blood, I'd just go find some moron, and make him bleed."
Reave: Nods, "I thought you might say something to that effect."
Spike: Whispers to Cocoa, "Great, now there's two of them."
| HTKWolfe777 chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
Reave: "Impressive, though we've worked with Shadow long enough to know that hitting a girl wouldn't matter to him."
Spike: "Huh, really? I've never seen him hit a girl before."
Cocoa: "He put a gun to my head when we first met."
Spike: "Oh yeah, can't beleive that I forgot about that."
Cocoa: Sigh, "But really, it's just so unchivalrous of him. This is why almost no one thinks pf him as a hero.
Shadow: "If your opponents don't have genders then you'll be harder to kill."
Spike & Cocoa: "YIKES!"
| Violentshadow chapter 3 . 1/21/2013
lol there going to body swap arn't thetxp
| Violentshadow chapter 2 . 1/21/2013
| Violentshadow chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
freaking awesome i love this xp
| Ace-The-Hedgehog117 chapter 20 . 12/27/2012
That was wonderful, the first day I started reading the library's staff Hasbro kick me out by chapter 15, great job.
| Guest chapter 20 . 12/27/2012
Just amazing. You really knew tr perspectives and personalities of the characters unlike ohter people who make them out of character. Honestly it was very enjoyable and gret to read. I'd love to read more from you and BTW Shadaze is my favorite couple.
| Nab450 chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
AMAZING! I love it!