Reviews for Harry Potter & the Ritual of Merlin's Choice
Guest chapter 17 . 1/24
I find this odd, mainly because Lily and James are 21 years old at this point in time, and Harry himself would be 17 years and 275 days old when he killed Tom, making him possible 18 years old at this time, making him 3 years younger then his parents... OHWELL, i've read some things in my time, i just found this amusing, and odd, it's great.
OneHellOfAMarshmellow chapter 33 . 1/24
Fallow52 chapter 33 . 1/21
xxxx KUDOS xxxx : )
Sailor Pandabear chapter 33 . 11/17/2015
Guest chapter 33 . 11/15/2015
Guest chapter 15 . 10/12/2015
I stopped reading right at the start of this chapter. When you have a device that can send you back in time with no restrictions, what idiot would go back to the very day he has to make the changes instead of a year or two earlier to make it much easier?
Guest chapter 8 . 10/11/2015
I have a hard time imaging Harry Potter could not get the Ministry to give him an international portkey after he killed Voldemort. There's not much he probably couldn't have gotten from them.
Skye chapter 33 . 10/5/2015
So... Harry and Luna just relive their lives until they die? Weird. I thought they would go back to their own time, and everyone would be alive. I'm not sure I like the final ending. I don't care about Snape, but I think you should stay in your own time. Time travel is one thing, but living in a different time boggles my mind. Good story though. I honestly am disappointed in the ending, but the content was good. A bit rushed, I found, and very little conflict or setbacks, but good! Luna didn't do much in the second half, though. All in all, I like it, but a few notable issues (ending, time orientation, Luna, lack of setbacks etc) that makes me like it a bit less. But still, keep it up!
Skye chapter 23 . 10/5/2015
Funny to see that Mrs. Black is the same in person as in portrait. "Begone, you filthy traitors. Defiling the halls of my fathers!' Blah, blah, but very well done.
rustyone chapter 33 . 10/4/2015
I really enjoyed this story. I hated to see "THE END"!
Skye chapter 15 . 10/4/2015
I have a question. Would it not have been possible to use a time-turner? It would take a heck of a lot of turns, but it would have been easier than traveling to Antarctica and creating a parallel universe, or whatever they did. Surely they weren't all destroyed in OOTP? I'm so confused. AU-time travel is beyond me. I tend to shy away from those stories, but I love Luna, so I decided to give it a shot when I saw she was the second most important here. I must admit, however confusing this is it is incredibly well written. It actually could (perhaps) pass off as J.K. Rowling, except for the odd grammar mistake, which almost no fanfic I've ever read could. Great story!
P.S. That's a lot of forged documents.
P.P.S. In the interview scene with Harry and Dudewhatsit, why did I think of Richard Armitage in Captain America?
P.P.P.S. Luna is actually quite accurate, and she is the most difficult character to write.
Bobboky chapter 33 . 9/30/2015
very nice work
HeartsGlow chapter 2 . 9/29/2015
He wont be in HIS universe, so really, he wont have set things right.
Lord Cartwright chapter 32 . 9/27/2015
Brilliant story...
dianaanne chapter 32 . 9/23/2015
Did I miss something? Is Severus in the long-term care ward?
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