Reviews for The Last Thoughts Of Kaji Ryoji
Xlater chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
That was good. */*
Rukusho chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
that was good *nods*
Xanatose chapter 1 . 7/22/2002
My opinion is that this is rather well done. A well concived story. The flash backs were handled nicely, and each lent its self well to building the atmosphere for the dark climax.

In the area of technicalities, I counted a few gramatical errors in the way for periods used instead of commas, and a comma where a semi-colon would have been appropirate. Ultimately nothing to be concerned with.

(Note... I do not understand what lead Spellcaster to assume you (the author) were insinuating that Misato killed Kaji. Misato doens't appear in this story other then in flashbacks. I'll be contacting that reviewer to discuss this.)
Spellcastre chapter 1 . 7/22/2002
So what? Your saying that Misato killed Kaji?

I really don't think that is true even though in the scene before, she was holding a gun. She was too broken up by it.

Anyways, this really was a good fic othe then my minor rant that wasn't even really a rant.

I actually enjoyed reading this, it was a very good idea.

I suggest you keep writing Eva stuff, your good at it.

While me at Eva fics, I suck!


-Spellcaster ~
Phi Templar chapter 1 . 7/21/2002
hmmm... that was kinda sad, even depressing.