Reviews for Changes
Bobbi Rightmyer chapter 5 . 23h
Visualizing Willie burying the first girl - heartbreaking!
Bobbi Rightmyer chapter 4 . 7/31
You made me feel so bad for Willie when he was saying his penance. Nice dinner dialogue.
Bobbi Rightmyer chapter 3 . 7/31
Poor Willie. It is interesting to read how Barnabas is training/conditioning Willie to be the perfect servant.
Bobbi Rightmyer chapter 2 . 7/31
"Chilly Willie Radio Hour"- like it! Also loved the "Rocky Horror" reference!
Bobbi Rightmyer chapter 1 . 7/31
Great disorientation!
mickeypigfish chapter 3 . 5/23
hellhound, Love it!
Telepathically bound by blood is a great device.
The beating reminds me of my childhood; it's tough to read.
mickeypigfish chapter 2 . 5/23
Love the Cemetery Caretaker's part.
Love Barnabas' line: I told you to bring me the animal, not befriend it.
I like the musical references; very good

Only one typo for you:
-well, after the initial encounter when it had creature had smashed...
should be
-well, after the initial encounter when it had smashed...
or
-well, after the initial encounter when the creature had smashed...
mickeypigfish chapter 1 . 5/23
I love the beginning where Willie's thoughts are "talking" to him.
The prayer is hilarious.
You know, I completely forgot about his tools and flash light.
Jo A Curl chapter 6 . 3/9
Great as usual a feeling of being there with the character and going through their times and turmoil with them. Wonderefully written and eloquently spoken.
Jo A Curl chapter 2 . 3/9
Love the references to some of my old favorites. Great Chapter, Willie is in deep shit now.
Jo A Curl chapter 1 . 3/9
Loved the way you have him begging for mercy from god, it almost seems the natural thing to do after all he was catholic and we catholics do ask for forgiveness at the most inopportune times. Love this chapter.
Magical Irish Dolphin chapter 6 . 1/31
Excellent final chapter. Enjoyed Willie's scenes with Vicki and Roger. How funny that the entire Collins clan watched him depart the Great House. And I laughed when Willie thought it was disturbing that Barnabas used to watch people in their bedrooms through his portrait. Very good story.
Magical Irish Dolphin chapter 5 . 1/30
It's nice that the days Willie suffered through off-camera when he released Barnabas from his coffin is getting properly explored. Enjoyed his run-in with Burke at the Blue Whale. It's nice that in the show, as well as here, Jason was honestly concerned for him. Dennis Patrick and John Karlen were terrific in those episodes, and you did the characters right in that, both with the drama, as well with your humor. The little girl mistaking Willie as a zombie was hilarious. Barnabas sure does run hot and cold with him. One minute he seems to be a harmless eccentric, the next he's either beating him or sucking his blood. (Or both.) And poor Willie having to dispose that innocent girl. That whole ending was heart-wrenchingly well done.
Magical Irish Dolphin chapter 4 . 1/29
Very emotional, Willie struggling to find the right words for forgiveness, and having him painfully relive all the punk mistakes he had made. Nice nightmare sequence. Looking forward to more.
Magical Irish Dolphin chapter 3 . 1/28
Very raw chapter. Poor Willie, his life has now changed forever.
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