Reviews for Changes
Joyce LaKee chapter 2 . 12/14/2015
LOL at Alms-House road being the location of the dairy farm. Your bio says you're from Pennsy. I sometimes put local PA references in my stories to see if anybody catches on. So far, no go. :)

Anyhow, interesting retelling of dark shadows.

Happy writing!
Cynthia curan chapter 1 . 10/6/2015
Fun Willie in Barn's Coffin, and that address to heaven.
Bonnie chapter 1 . 10/3/2015
Fantastic!
bobbidawnrightmyer chapter 1 . 10/2/2015
Good!
Bobbi Rightmyer chapter 5 . 7/31/2015
Visualizing Willie burying the first girl - heartbreaking!
Bobbi Rightmyer chapter 4 . 7/31/2015
You made me feel so bad for Willie when he was saying his penance. Nice dinner dialogue.
Bobbi Rightmyer chapter 3 . 7/31/2015
Poor Willie. It is interesting to read how Barnabas is training/conditioning Willie to be the perfect servant.
Bobbi Rightmyer chapter 2 . 7/31/2015
"Chilly Willie Radio Hour"- like it! Also loved the "Rocky Horror" reference!
Bobbi Rightmyer chapter 1 . 7/31/2015
Great disorientation!
mickeypigfish chapter 3 . 5/23/2015
hellhound, Love it!
Telepathically bound by blood is a great device.
The beating reminds me of my childhood; it's tough to read.
mickeypigfish chapter 2 . 5/23/2015
Love the Cemetery Caretaker's part.
Love Barnabas' line: I told you to bring me the animal, not befriend it.
I like the musical references; very good

Only one typo for you:
-well, after the initial encounter when it had creature had smashed...
should be
-well, after the initial encounter when it had smashed...
or
-well, after the initial encounter when the creature had smashed...
mickeypigfish chapter 1 . 5/23/2015
I love the beginning where Willie's thoughts are "talking" to him.
The prayer is hilarious.
You know, I completely forgot about his tools and flash light.
Jo A Curl chapter 6 . 3/9/2015
Great as usual a feeling of being there with the character and going through their times and turmoil with them. Wonderefully written and eloquently spoken.
Jo A Curl chapter 2 . 3/9/2015
Love the references to some of my old favorites. Great Chapter, Willie is in deep shit now.
Jo A Curl chapter 1 . 3/9/2015
Loved the way you have him begging for mercy from god, it almost seems the natural thing to do after all he was catholic and we catholics do ask for forgiveness at the most inopportune times. Love this chapter.
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