Reviews for Beast of Burden
Grac3 chapter 7 . 9/21/2014
"Did you mourn?" That was mean! That was so mean!
Winters-Wonderland chapter 2 . 1/14/2014
I, too am capable of reciting the whole movie by memory as well. How many times have you seen the movie? Have you ever heard the expression, when referring to a movie as something you have seen "a hundred times"? Yeah, I intend to do just that. I dont know how long it will take me though but I am so going to do it! Lol
noukinav018 chapter 7 . 11/27/2013
That was simply fantastic! LOL
Oh! That is rich. Sif being protective over Loki is a good sign. And it was interesting to know what Loki did in the past fooling Sif to kiss him while he had shapeshifted into Thor XD That was so cool to include in here. Wow, now everyone of them know that he is a Frost Giant and not an Asgardian. Still, they can't hold that against him. Maybe they will feel guilty for ever mocking him in the past. Now they'll be cautious about it... That can irk Loki I think. Anyway, it was fun to read this piece of work. I will keep reading and enjoying the next one.
Do keep writing!
noukinav018 chapter 6 . 11/27/2013
Oh my gosh! May the prince of VAle help them with the elusive king Hoenir. He must have felt all that magic from Amora. Now he may get some answers, So, that's why the guards behaved in that way. As the Enchantress wants the trickster dead... Oh dear, they must find him and help him before Amora does anything nasty to him. He's all drained and exhausted with everything he has done.
noukinav018 chapter 5 . 11/27/2013
Oh boy, Loki can't get away without being crushed first... That's so unfair :(
Now they have to rescue Loki and Darcy. Oh dear. Why would they want to kill him on the spot? Are they insane?ยก
noukinav018 chapter 4 . 11/27/2013
Right... This is a complete disaster. Is is too much to ask that both kingdoms mend their relationship and to be merry forever and ever? XD
No! She is after the young prince right now! This is going to get tricky and with Darcy on the loose.
Loki must anticipate this and quickly. CAn't he get the story of that stone out of anyone? He must move fast!
noukinav018 chapter 3 . 11/27/2013
Hahaha I got a good laugh with Darcy. It is a shame that she isn't paired with Loki :( I'm quite fond of those stories where Darcy and Loki are an item :D
ROTFL. If Loki is not impressed after that, then I don't know what will she have to do to have that effect on the trickster prince.
Oh goody! Volstagg is gonna have a heart attack when he gets to know where Darcy is. The girl has spunk. Which is cool and totally awesome. I can picture her talking Amora down.
Hopefully, the fear for Darcy's life and also Jane's life will get the princes to act swiftly and without delay. Oh my goodness, what disasters are they to face this time?
They can't seem to avoud the reasons to end up in the healing rooms...
noukinav018 chapter 2 . 11/27/2013
That was such a close call! Unless that was Amora's plan,... Please tell that the Enchantress didn't expect Loki to take the stone. And what in the world is she trying to do? I guess if Amora manages to convince Jane about not trusting Loki, she's gonna have some people telling her how the facts are.
noukinav018 chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
That was not expected, not now at least. Why has he to be rash and just hold this against Loki? He was just trying to make him see reason as fast as possible. Seriously, the young prince has a lot of things to deal with. But now the worst thing is that he will have to handle with a poisoned Jane. Not to mention what other things will Amora say to her!
Will Jane be so weak as to be taken in by Amora? I can't believe she'll let herself be a puppet of the Enchantress.
JTReads chapter 7 . 8/9/2013
This may be my favorite of the ones in this series I've read so far 3
Maia2 chapter 7 . 3/11/2013
Aww, lovely, lovely story. I really liked the Jotun element here, and how it came to play. It was really smart and cool using another civilization to show a completely different take on the children of the Frost Giants. And to draw that parallel that in the end, Odin did think highly of those children, he did make one of them his prince, did he not? Really nice study of human nature and behavior.
Of course, lots of Loki AND Thor whumpage, as usual. These poor guys can't catch a break, huh? Of course, they're just so great when they're worrying about each other...
Thanks for sharing.
Scfilover chapter 7 . 3/6/2013
Thank you for another great story :)
Child of the Night13 chapter 7 . 11/26/2012
Awesome story! A masterpiece! Your a fantastic writer
L.C. Lane chapter 7 . 11/25/2012
Glad you had a great Thx giving; I did too :) The story was great, as always. And the development of Thor and Loki's relationship as well as Loki and Odin's is really fantastic. Fabulous job.
Haruko-Mizumi chapter 7 . 11/23/2012
Let's see if trouble can leave our boys alone for a while and give them some peace.

I will always be happy to see more of Loki and Thor from you guys if you chose to write more, but as a fellow writer, I more completely understand the need to get your own work done, and write about what you're most passionate about at the moment.

Best of luck to the both of you!
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