Reviews for Nightmare Departed
Silence Navarathna chapter 3 . 10/22/2014
This should really be rated M, the graphic sex scenes and incest are more than enough to constitute a rating change. But I like the story and the much more brutal vampire pair.
AnaBookWorm chapter 4 . 9/19/2014
You should really change the rating to M and it sort of felt like it was a finished story but otherwise LOVING IT!
AnaBookWorm chapter 3 . 3/29/2014
I really like this but you should change the rating to M.
floodmaster16 chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
Ok, this is awkward. I mean, the story is superbly written, it has great quality, but the theme is kind of a little bit disturbing. Regardless, it's ok when you manage to distance yourself morally from it.
NicNack4U chapter 4 . 1/14/2014
Will you be updating? Could you, please? Because I think this is amazing! I love fictional incest pairings. :)
Chiara Polairix Edelstein chapter 4 . 12/24/2013
OMFB! This s Awesome but Its Forbidden but is the Law ;)
sweetpuppy499 chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
you made the story all werid because it was a story adout a human and a vampire who found love but no you made it like a dream and you let him live in the dream but you made it like mavis who is 18 years old in human years you made it like mavis and her father were married
Ireshman chapter 4 . 7/3/2013
No. Just no. It's really creepy considering this is a children's movie with Adam Sandler as Dracula and Selena Gomez as Mavis. If you imagine their voices in your head... I am officially scarred for life. 0.o
M chapter 4 . 4/11/2013
Your really sick you no that?
Tsigun chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
That was very disturbing. Maybe its just me.. but I thought it was funny when Mavis tortured Johnny, but ya after a few moments I was like...wait a minute what just happened. But good attempt with drac Mavis pairing
Guest chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
I... actually really like the pairing. But I can't imagine Mavis as a malevolent person, so the prospect of her torturing Jonathan was a huge turn off to me... Maayybe her father, for his daughter's sake. But that's just my feeling on the issue.
Takashi Komuro chapter 4 . 3/4/2013
This story is perfect. It has incest(which I love) and bloodlust. Couldn't have read a better story.
kayomay chapter 4 . 2/28/2013
I love your dark take on this story! Absolutely enthralling!
You really used the whole Vampire bloodlust thing to enhance the story.
Happy writing!
ChronoMitsurugi chapter 4 . 2/22/2013
A rather dark and particularly disturbing fic. Yet it was enjoyable. Still creeped out by the whole father/daughter thing.
SamxJazzlover23 chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
I like the writing although a father and daughter romance is kinda gross, no offense i like you're writing style but father and daughter as a romance eh not my type of thing.
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