|Reviews for Great Expectations|
| Heeroh chapter 13 . 2/19
Pretty sad, but still a good ending to a good story. I wasn't expecting much when I started so I'm pleasantly surprised with how deep it was. I might check your other stuff now lol
| Heeroh chapter 4 . 2/19
Wow I saved the end of this chapter and only got to read it at 1 in the morning. I was not ready for that. My heart is beating fast from that twist haha...
| trunksgf96 chapter 13 . 2/2
So I Favored this story a while ago, and got maybe halfway through. Well I say it again today and saw that it was complete so I thought I would read it again and it was amazing. I love a good Romeo and Juliet story and you really knew how to set the story with certain emotions. Thanks for writing an awesome story, it was a really good read.
| Heseltine chapter 13 . 1/17
That was an amazing read, i've read a few comments already and seen people moaning how you ended on a sad note but i actually believe it makes this story more memorable, one slight problem was how you wrote gohan's death (i didnt think saiyans could fly in space hence why they use space pods) and how the Z senshi reacted, i would of assumed Vegeta would of moaned about how he took the 'cowards way out' and not dieing a 'warriors death' other than that it was a great story that made me sad then happy then ended with me being sad again especially with Gotens POV.
Guess i need to read a comedy now to cheer me up :)
| snailhunter23 chapter 13 . 10/11/2013
i hated everything about this story im sorry but thats way 2 fucked he didnt deserve this story makes me hate every i hate you i dont like the ending at all
| snailhunter23 chapter 12 . 10/11/2013
and now i hate this story waste of time
| snailhunter23 chapter 9 . 10/11/2013
ive never cried so much in my life
| snailhunter23 chapter 2 . 10/11/2013
you are a great author i love this story so much
| sushi500 chapter 13 . 10/7/2013
This is an amazing story. I nearly cried several times while reading. It was captivating, mesmerizing, and extremely well written. I have read a lot stories of Gohan and Videl but this is the best by far. Truly this is a masterpiece and can be almost considered a novel. This story has humor, love, and tragedy. I think I can accurately say that this story can be considered the true Romeo and Juliet of DBZ. You have a lot of talent and should continue writing. In my opinion this is literary work of art. I will gladly share this story with anyone who will take a read. What you said at the end about the epilogue being written due to the lack of a Christmas chapter is really not important. Personally I feel the story was better off without it. Also I think it is a good idea that you are finishing the story here instead of writing a sequel. I will continue to read your stories and will look forward to reading your next story. Again very well done!
| SEV1994 chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
reading it for the second time but would just like to point out its Charles dickens not dickinson
| Mors427 chapter 13 . 9/22/2013
Well I am trying my hardest not to cry, but there are tears just waiting to be released. So damn you for what you did to Gohan and Goten.
| Kakawot chapter 8 . 9/15/2013
Loving the story so far, and it's always cool to see a fellow Dutch author on this site.
I noticed it when the word 'matras' popped up. I had to do a double take when my English inner voice tripped up on the word, and my hunch turned out to be right.
I have a feeling this story is not going to end well, but I'll wait, read and see for myself. Thanks for sharing it with the rest of the world!
| Darkestpetals chapter 13 . 9/9/2013
Thank you, for breaking my heart! You sick twisted writer! POOR GOTEN! How could you! HOW, DARE YOU? My soul is crushed!
Really enjoyed the story by the way. Couldn't stop until I was done! It was different and amazing! I just loved it!
| The Flash Pirates chapter 13 . 8/31/2013
I wanna cryyy. And I'm a freakin guy. Yyyyyyyyy. Ur evil for writing so goood
| Anon chapter 13 . 8/11/2013
WTF IS WRONG WITH YOU!? putting Gohan through all that then to give him some light in the shining darkness, and then in the end TAKING IT AWAY! this was a sad story with some really happy moments in it, and you ended it sadly :( but you did a very good job of writing it, and if it could make me feel this sad, to literally cry as Goten told his dead brother's casket about that story he made, you ended it well, even if you killed the 2 people i wouldve loved to see MORE in dbz just because they were wonderful, but i give the story a 9 out of 10, it wouldve been a 10 if you didn't kill them, you Steven Moffat imitating mofo