|Reviews for From my Window|
| Peelmeagrapenyc chapter 20 . 1/30
Sweetness :-). Well done
| cfigueroa78 chapter 10 . 1/16
I decided to keep going and I'm wondering, is this based on The Vow?! The kids are theirs but they aren't together? I recall in the book she suffered from an accident - memory loss?
| cfigueroa78 chapter 6 . 1/16
This is a beautiful but very sad story. Clearly he is married to someone else and has children. I hate stories like this where he ends up married with a family to anyone but Bella - and vice versa with her. It's just too heartbreaking and unfair to their love story because it feels like it's over ... They have different lives now. Can't read this anti-Bella/Edward story because that's what it really is.
| WAlove chapter 13 . 12/29/2013
I can't believe this. Abusive and controlling behaviour is never, in any way, a sign of too much love or protectiviness.
| souplover9 chapter 20 . 10/16/2013
This was bitter, sweet, sad and cute. Thanks for sharing. I greatly enjoyed it.
| Twilightfanatic85 chapter 20 . 10/7/2013
This story made me cry, poor Edward he loves her so much that he went to so much suffering and crying until he got her! I'm glad they are together again!
| Eileen22 chapter 20 . 9/7/2013
Love this crazy in love edward
| romycullen chapter 20 . 3/17/2013
Oh my god I was scared for so many chapters!
I love this insecure possessive creepWard
Man, and bella... 5 kids? jesus...
| crudeladevil chapter 16 . 1/18/2013
Oh my God I thought I will l laugh myself to death. Another "briliant" Edwards "wisdom": "He was awesome…end of story."
He is sometimes so adorably stupid.
| crudeladevil chapter 13 . 1/18/2013
You know, I think that it is actually very hard to write a good drabble... in just a few words to describe the whole specrum of emotions, someone must be very talented to do that. I certainly have much problem to abbreviate my verbal production ( in every sphere of life).
That is the reason why I usually dont read drabbles.
I remember last summer when I literaly run into your story. Thank God I was on vacation, because I couldnt drop it to the end. And than God I came across it when it was completed. It would killed me to wait day by day to know what happened next.
And I remember that I had fully embrace this Edward. Yes he is jelous and possessive to patological borders, but Bella described him as inteligent man, and I would add that he is truely full blooded male... with a ambis deep devotion to his woman. How could you not love him.
"The therapist told you to go because I'm a possessive, jealous motherfucker. I love you. This is how I love... if you were taken from me, I'd be lost...You're my life, baby. Without you…I'm worthless. You're my heart, my soul, my reason for living. So excuse me if I went above and beyond to try and keep you safe...But if you want me to change, I'll change. "
The deep of his obsession is heartbreaking.
I couldnt remember when I red shot story so full of emotions and events that make you feel after like you red a whole Twilight saga.. a whole 2000 I was devastated when you pull it... delighted when you reposted od TWCS... devastated when you stop reposted it (I wrote a review... i jinxed myself with it... again (look at my profile for explanatin))...delighed again when I find it accidentally...even a little bit changed.
Ha, I just rememberd another Edwards briliant comment ( I didnt find it here), which I thought was epic : "Yeah. Im that good."
Sorry for long rambling. Like I said - I dont know how to do drabble. But you do it. Professionally. And I must finish this ode to your writting skills with sentence which impressed me to the hell, because in only 8 words you manage to describe the whole wide world of fan fiction. It was so briliant that I had to quote you in my profile. Go adead, look at it.
| crudeladevil chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
Why rewriting? It was perfect as it was!
| genypher chapter 20 . 1/4/2013
So, I started reading this as a WIP, but then I stopped cuz I couldn't quite get into the groove of the storyline.
I'm glad I came back to it. :-) Its a good depiction of how real life effects even solid love.
Thanks for the fic!
| girlygirl0706 chapter 8 . 12/12/2012
I don't remember! I read this and can't remember anything. I know the chapter where they are in the past are new. I just don't remember any of the old version of this story.
| MarLea Pie chapter 9 . 11/25/2012
"Neither rain nor sleet nor dark of night, will keep you from making my pants get tight." - Love love love this line.
| MarLea Pie chapter 8 . 11/25/2012
"worrying that he had fucked the smart out of her." - Bahahahaha!
"She shouldn't have been aroused by the brutality she'd just witnessed, but she was." - well yeah. It's Edward for f*cks sake!
Swooooon at the last line.