Reviews for Capitol Gurls
Just Smudge chapter 24 . 6/26/2013
Hiya! Good job there- I think, though this is only a filler, by doing this you've given yourself a whole bunch of scenarios waiting to happen! Hayden and Harmony can send letters- and what happens if one gets caught and reveals their location? And don't forget the bombing of innocent Capitolite children during Mockingjay!
Good job.
DoNotOpenTheBox chapter 23 . 1/29/2013
Its a bit short but good...what about foxface?
Just Smudge chapter 23 . 1/28/2013
Clever! But Melody can't be that rich, can she? That must cost and awful lot!
3PeetaAndKatniss3 chapter 22 . 1/28/2013
I really like this story! I can't wait for the next update!
Just Smudge chapter 22 . 1/27/2013
Yay! Good job! I think more in Henna's POV would be good, to find out what she's thinking. This story is really cute :)
TheGirlWhoWoreNeon chapter 21 . 1/10/2013
This is a very interesting story! :D

One small thing I think it could use to shine to max capacity is a betareader. Have you ever considered using one? If you need one, I'll do it! :D
Fluffy the chicken chapter 21 . 11/30/2012
Just Smudge chapter 21 . 11/29/2012
I found Haydens behaviour a little OOC...
Fluffy the chicken chapter 20 . 11/26/2012
awwww! das sweet
DoNotOpenTheBox chapter 20 . 11/26/2012
anouther great chapter
Just Smudge chapter 20 . 11/25/2012
So cute! Exactly how old are they, though?
Fluffy the chicken chapter 19 . 11/24/2012
:D i loooooooove it!
Just Smudge chapter 19 . 11/24/2012
YEs!? AGREE! And hmm... Well, Henna could get jealous of Haymony's friendship. And Melody would certainly have something to say about it!
Just Smudge chapter 17 . 11/21/2012
*Giggle* That's so cute! You sure can write fluff!
Fluffy the chicken chapter 16 . 11/18/2012
awwww thats sweet
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