“Can I have some more please?Oliver Twist

This cliffhanger has lasted over four years. Makes me sad.

Figured I’d give this a re-read, I do hope you get back to this eventually.

This is interesting

Really hope you find that mojo, and perhaps a muse or two! Like to see where this is going?

loving the story, I hope your muse returns to help with this soon D

Ido hope that you are planning on finishing this project as it is very good and has great potential, I would really like to see where you will take it. Maybe try a firefly story next. Great story so far.

harry goes from a smart mature kid to a dumbass child

I can only presume that this story has been abandoned as it was last updated on Feb 24, 2019 and it is now Apr 02, 2023. That is a shame, as the story has been quite entertaining so far and I’m sure I’m not the only one wishing it were completed properly. If there is any chance of awakening the author to continue with the story by posting a review, then I am more than happy to provide one.

I hope that any problems you have been facing the past few years are successfully overcome so we may enjoy the further adventures of Harry Potter in the Mass Effect universe.

Borgin, not Burgin.

This was a fun read. You got Liara down pretty well and I like to see what changes her as a parent made to Harry.

Also a few good explanations of canon holes, like here with Dumbles being not contactable.

I hope you find the inspiration to continue this at some point.

I'm having a really hard time trying to buy what this chapter is selling.
Harry's lived in an almost utopian society pretty much since the moment he was allowed outside. He then encounters a world of racism and bigotry that has incredibly dodgy motives regarding his life and future.

Why would the slight desire to know about his parents be anywhere near enough for him to hang around after he realises how (to him) utterly abhorrent this society is?

Don't get me wrong, most of the HP fanfics do this and I have the same thought. Makes them (and this) rather hard to get into. Kinda difficult to immerse yourself in something that fundimentally doesn't make sense.

Well, this story has some serious potential, but it's currently clearly dead, even if the writer insists it isn't.

This is a really interesting story. I've noticed many tropes common in other stories have been ether scoffed at or approached in a unique way, much like how the limited number of students at Hogwarts isn't down to decreased population from inbreeding and war, but a limitation of the magic of the castle. It has its own plot holes, I'd argue, but it's always nice to see a fresh take on why things are the way they are in HP fanfics, it can get abit samey after spending so much time reading various fanfictions, many tend to end up blended together for me.

Well, you were never going to get through 7 years of school and then continue on with Harry pushing humanity/wizardry up into space and eventually take on Reapers like you pretended to hint at anyway. That'd take longer than a century to write.

I hope you just gave up on writing instead of getting covid or something.