Thanks for a really great read. Would have loved to see more of this. Sure hope you find your way back to it at some point.

Updated: Feb 24, 2019; currently June 13, 2024. I certainly hope that you haven’t actually abandoned this story but have only put it on a long hiatus. I have enjoyed your story so far and would love to see it completed.

A fun and interesting story.

I am still reading the first quarter of this chapter and find it boring and not exceptionally interesting. I will say that from Chap1? That the Potters lineage is lower than the black line? Thing I find interesting about this is that the Potters is a direct descendant line of one of the Hogwarts Founders and also the also the Blacks have no direct descendant line from any Founder Line or Merrdyn(Merlin) or Le Fay line from either family line? Yet according to the prophesy his parents had beaten back the dark lord thrice?
Again why didn't Harry be introduced to his Family Account Manager? I mean you outline his assets inventory from Remus help, but for someone who comes from the prominent wizarding family no one tells him shit about his heritage ...its like...there you go, ancestral family manor go for it? Asking for an invitation to his family manor yet remus and dumbles were there fixing up some part of the manor before he arrived?
Not enough information or should I say the wrong info given Author notes I mean

I don't understand, how does fairly intelligent Harry turn into this mindless canon drone that's basically just book Harry with Liara in his ear, sure there are some differences, but overall the plot points are identical. I just can't see the studious Harry we saw with the asari being friends with Ron of all people. I get I have 6 more chapters to reach the last chapter, so things can change, but holy F***. So much plot beforehand just to arrive to the old boring stuff, that I purposefully ran away from to fanfiction is just plain sad. I at least appreciate making Dumbles actually do some good instead of bashing, kudos.

I expect orbital bombartment,when they find out that ministry killed Pandora because she solved the problem

Great chapter! And I'm happy that your not making Dumbledore evil cause people are typically gray not just good or evil

Liara would be right to pull him out of that school. I can only imagine how she's gonna react to the other things that'll attack him

“Can I have some more please?Oliver Twist

This cliffhanger has lasted over four years. Makes me sad.

Figured I’d give this a re-read, I do hope you get back to this eventually.

This is interesting

Really hope you find that mojo, and perhaps a muse or two! Like to see where this is going?

loving the story, I hope your muse returns to help with this soon D

Ido hope that you are planning on finishing this project as it is very good and has great potential, I would really like to see where you will take it. Maybe try a firefly story next. Great story so far.